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their love

You had me fooled 
Thinking that you only wanted to befriends
But when you told me that you loved me 
I was embarrassed on how to feel
All I could do was frown
Then you asked me to marry you and all I could do 
Was cry.
With tears of joy I read to you my loving vows
And you read me yours.
After the day I said I do I promised to 
Love and cherish you until the day I die
And you hopped that the day would never come.
But one day I was feeling terrible and you 
prayed                                                                                                                           
                       
To god hoping that this wouldn’t be the day 
That we would have to say goodbye.
Four  days of agony and pain for the both of us went 
By and one that fifth day I got up and was feeling swell. 

After the two were married for 39 years they both 
Died together with no pain. They loved each other for as long as 

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  1. Date: 6/8/2011 7:43:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Erica. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

  1. Date: 6/5/2011 1:03:00 PM
    Nice tale of love, erica