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Ash In Her Words

She's choking on blood clots 
over the moon
her mind has gone wondering and 
it won't be back soon.

She's talking to angels 
under the sea
her windy expression 
is causing a breeze.

She's purple mixtures
of all that's not good,
her shape isn't changing
i don't think that it could.

She walks with the devil 
and flies with the birds.
Her mouth is an ashtray
and she's ashing her words.

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  1. Date: 6/7/2011 7:09:00 AM

    Thanks everyone. i appreciate the awesome comments. I have tons of poetry that i have written over the years. i'll keep posting them here and i'd love you to keep being honest about what you think! I love writing!

  1. Date: 6/4/2011 8:36:00 PM

    Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your amazing creative poetry.. enjoy the site as u share words with luv..

  1. Date: 6/4/2011 3:45:00 PM

    ... LOVE THIS POEM!! FLUFFY

  1. Date: 6/4/2011 2:13:00 PM

    Nice charaCTER sketch you have drawn "she", Chili

  1. Date: 6/4/2011 1:12:00 PM

    really cool poem chilli i know someone like this Luv*Skat