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Two Shooter

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Two Shooter

I'll tell you this first, guns are my curse
I was dealt Ace's and watched all their faces
Looked around and called all in
Everyone folded, but Buckshot just grinned 

He moved up his stack, with a loud crack
I just love playing a maniac
I drew two cards to make him think
He drew one card and took a drink

I reached for my boot, got my Two Shooter
Buckshot flipped over his eight outer
My Ace's won, as he went for his gun
I told him "Son, you make winning fun"

I filled my boot with money as Buckshot stood up
Could have been any outcome with my sad luck
He yelled "Eat lead you no good low down cheat"
I shot him dead with that Two Shooter in my sleeve

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  1. Date: 4/22/2012 9:15:00 AM

    Great write. Held my attention rivoted til the end. Congratulations on the win.

  1. Date: 7/15/2011 11:18:00 AM

    Enjoyed reading funny too!! How are you my friend?

  1. Date: 6/8/2011 10:50:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Paula's "Pick A Card"contest Mitch. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/7/2011 8:16:00 AM

    Congrats Mitch on your win in Paula's contest.

  1. Date: 6/6/2011 9:35:00 AM

    Dear Mitch, I was really engrossed in the story behind this poem. Reminded me of the old West poker games. So nice to see you posting again. Congratulations on your win in Paula's contest! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 6/6/2011 9:33:00 AM

    Right on Mitch. You wrote a rootin' tootin' lead buster here. Congratulations on your win~!

  1. Date: 6/6/2011 8:22:00 AM

    Congrats Mitch on your exciting win in Paula's contest with this unique write my friend.. super one..enjoy with luv..

  1. Date: 6/1/2011 8:50:00 AM

    wow Mitch this is full of great imagery and excellent story ..luv the aces and six shooter my friend..if for the contest..good luck..it is a winning write luv..