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What If

What if I told you 
I loved you
that your love is as delicate
as my heart 
that having you close
makes me feel
all more alive 
and I love seeing
that look in your eyes
that look I see
in our private moments
and doesn't hide 
even in 
our darkest moments
this feeling I embrace
you in my life
this moment
this hour
this very day 
I love you

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  1. Date: 6/15/2011 10:50:00 AM

    Congratulations on your HM in Desiree's "What If" contest Ashley. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/14/2011 2:54:00 PM

    Congrats on your HM, Ash. Excellent piece. Nice going. xxxRalph

  1. Date: 6/14/2011 1:50:00 PM

    My congratulations on the win in the contest of desiree, Ashley

  1. Date: 6/14/2011 1:16:00 PM

    Congrats Ahsley on your HM for this excellent entry luv..super write..luv..

  1. Date: 6/14/2011 1:15:00 PM

    Congrats Ashley on your HM for this excellent entry luv.. super..

  1. Date: 6/1/2011 1:20:00 AM

    Luv*Skat

  1. Date: 5/31/2011 6:05:00 PM

    Passionate expressions of feelings of love nicely worded, Ashley

  1. Date: 5/31/2011 10:46:00 AM

    what if should be a said now :)