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Blank Page

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Blank Page

Too long have I been staring at this cruel blank page before me, My crazed, hysteric mind screaming and imploring I know there is a message that's dying to come out— I need to fill this confounded page without the slightest doubt! It's a simple predicament to manipulate, Into a mass of thought A futile attempt to insinuate, Weak hints are left with naught I sit here in silent desperation, What can fill this page? I slap myself in indignation, My eagerness becoming rage! Like roaches sporadically running from light My thoughts are but a haze The words I write just don't seem right, On this cruel blank page!

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  1. Date: 4/26/2014 11:54:00 AM
    The first entry you have for the soup is a perfect introduction of the cascade of material that was to follow it. It felt like you were summoning the poems to come forth and fill an ancient yet blank book. You accidentally spill the ink and words begin forming and thus begins the journey.

  1. Date: 12/12/2013 5:29:00 PM
    I decided to go back to your first posted poem and see where it all started and oh yeah, did it ever start!... You shoulda slapped that blank page instead of yourself, then torn it into little pieces, stomped on it, ground it into the floor, laughed and pointed at it then...

    Ryerson Avatar Tim Ryerson
    Date: 12/12/2013 5:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yeah I know, I need to get back on my medication...
  1. Date: 12/6/2013 2:19:00 AM
    Brilliant description of the emotional toll of writers block. It's especially hard when you have a deluge of emotion ready to flow and no words to set them free into the world. It's good to see you beat the block. Awesome

  1. Date: 11/24/2013 5:19:00 PM
    Beginning is always so hard. Look back now and realize how you have grown. Life is a circle game. ~Kilmer

  1. Date: 7/20/2013 9:50:00 PM
    !!!

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 5:54:00 AM
    Came to read your first poem on the soup...always interesting to see. I know exactly what you mean here!

  1. Date: 11/6/2012 2:57:00 PM
    Hey, I LOVE your first poem here. HOw great is this?? And that blank page was replaced by Lots of pages of poetry to come!!

  1. Date: 9/23/2012 7:48:00 PM
    Dear Laura, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. I Thank-YOU I have had writers block of late.After reading this MasterPiece again, I have found Inspiration. I Thank- YOU for YOUR many Gracious Comments, received with Joy. LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry

  1. Date: 5/10/2012 12:16:00 AM
    Smile ˜ Hi Beautiful Laura, Thaought That I Would Journey Back To Your Poetics Beginning Here At Soup * You Know, I Used To Get A Bit Excited Whenever I Considered The Boundless Skies The Limit Offered Whilein Considering Or Composing Verse ˜ As A Matter Of Honesty I Haven't Even Picked An Empty Blank Page Up As Of Late Although I Am Certain If I Am Allowed Another Day & Were To Lift A Pen Something Would Spill Out ˜ But Never Would It Compare Unto The Beauty I Have Found Here At PoetrySoup ˜ My Love to You, John!:) ˜

  1. Date: 3/14/2012 10:54:00 AM
    Just taking in your first here on soup, not disappointed, brilliant poem. harry

  1. Date: 10/30/2011 4:41:00 AM
    Dear Laura, This POEM is Absolutely Beautiful A Perfect Poem, Explaining Writer's Block YOU are a very Talented POETESS with LOVE, ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Liege...HG Soup Mail Call

  1. Date: 8/23/2011 3:05:00 PM
    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Laura. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/29/2011 11:22:00 PM
    profound epicness of all that is epic - Kyle

  1. Date: 6/4/2011 11:47:00 AM
    I know the feeling that you have so nicely described..congrats...those blank pages are SO cruel...BG

  1. Date: 6/3/2011 7:53:00 PM
    Oh, yes, I know all about this writer's block and poems about writer's block. I have my share of them. haha. COOLIO, Laura. Congrats for your win.

  1. Date: 6/3/2011 3:30:00 PM
    Congratulations on this win in the contest of p.d., Laura

  1. Date: 6/3/2011 11:05:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Poet Destroyer's contest Laura. Love, Carol

    Breidenthal Avatar Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 6/5/2011 5:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Wait...I won?
  1. Date: 6/3/2011 9:41:00 AM
    Congrats Laura on your wonderful win with this piece from the beginning on PS. great then and now luv..

  1. Date: 6/3/2011 7:20:00 AM
    congrats on your excellent entry into the contest Luv*Skat

  1. Date: 5/29/2011 4:18:00 AM
    beautiful... what inspired you i wonder

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