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Missing

I hate that I can't see you
or hear your gentle song
Life is unfair to me
How do I move on

Can I take the steps without you
Will my tears turn to smiles
Can I run against the winds
or crawl for miles and miles

I hate it when I can't see you
or hear your gentle song
Please life care for me
Then together we can move on

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  1. Date: 5/18/2012 7:16:00 PM

    Thank you for your kind words... K.

  1. Date: 5/18/2012 7:14:00 PM

    Lovely cadence and rhyming, Michelle... I like the way you repeat the first two lines into the third verse, and your middle verse accentuates the sadness you feel. Well done again! Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 5/27/2011 1:02:00 PM

    Such a heartfelt penning here. A good penning. Surely been there too.