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THEN GOD PROCLAIMED

I’ll design a woman, a woman of  style,

And fashion her for strength all the while.

Dubious things, she will put aside,

But stumble, she must not, over her pride.

She will be a leader, motivated by love,

And guided by pearls furnished from above.

I’ll give her a kiss sweeter than wine

And a soul with character that’s genuine.

She shall be capable of doing all my will;

And, my law of the spirit, she will fulfill.

I’ll make her a lady, and she will pass  muster,

For lunch, she’ll bring her lover the Eshcol cluster.

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  1. Date: 10/18/2008 10:35:00 AM

    Albert - Congratulations on your poem being featured this week on Poetry Soup! Peace always, John

  1. Date: 10/15/2008 6:58:00 PM

    Congrats on your wonderful poem being featured this week - God Bless

  1. Date: 10/14/2008 7:13:00 PM

    This was great poem indeed. Last line sure took a great attention of mine:) Congratulations !!Love, Chitra

  1. Date: 10/14/2008 7:08:00 PM

    Well you had me all the way to the last line, Albert and then I went, "Whats that?" as in "Eshcol cluster" ... smile ...

  1. Date: 10/14/2008 7:21:00 AM

    Very nice indeed. Love the flow and imagery.This poem takes the reader's imagination on a free flight of fantasy. Thanks for sharing this inspirational message. Meg.

  1. Date: 10/13/2008 6:51:00 PM

    Congratulations on this wonderful poem being featured this week! Keep writing! ~ Carrie

  1. Date: 10/13/2008 5:09:00 PM

    Interesting view. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen

  1. Date: 10/13/2008 7:08:00 AM

    Really cool poem, Albert...nice flow of words and great imagery!

  1. Date: 10/13/2008 6:48:00 AM

    Congratulations Albert, on the featuring of your poem "Then God Proclaimed." Vince

  1. Date: 10/13/2008 5:33:00 AM

    Congrats Albert on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar