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Oh Lord

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Oh Lord




cast me into shadow
throw me to the hell
my loyalty has been questioned
against my will
my love has no love for me now
tell me why always me and how?
no reason to live in this dreary world
my devotions
my prayers
my artistic persuasions
take away all I have 
now  there is no need to live
with a pensive heart 
no reason to proclaim
while I have been disdained
with my open heart 
i beg you
now tell you to tell him
I  loved, only loved
but cast me into shadow
throw me to the hell






sorry all of u ...and i beg u guys just forgive me for this mundane piece.....sorry 
again !

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  1. Date: 5/31/2011 7:29:00 PM

    We all feel like this at one time or another! You expressed your feelings well!

  1. Date: 5/24/2011 9:09:00 PM

    very impassioned please Smriti .. your expressions are very eloquent my friend.. enjoyed with luv..

  1. Date: 5/24/2011 3:46:00 PM

    meaningful atonement, smriti