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Fallen Leaves

To you 
rocks look lifeless
the fallen leaves
look hellishly dead


I have seen dead leaves
(as you say)
breathing life into God's heart
because they did never
learn to betray Him

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  1. Date: 5/24/2011 5:55:00 PM

    Oh ! bother ..this is really nice and I feel and i agree wid ur views here...thanx for ur reviews...regr

  1. Date: 5/24/2011 5:12:00 PM

    Hummm, nice! I enjoy the way you write it's lovely! ~Beloved Faizah

    Dey Avatar Chhutan Dey Date: 5/24/2011 5:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    THANK YOU SO MUCH HONEY...THIS GIVE ME STRENGTH TO CONTINUE.
  1. Date: 5/24/2011 4:09:00 PM

    beautiful and meaningful write on the fallen leaves, Chhutan