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FLESH, RESURRECTED

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FLESH, RESURRECTED

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When hunchbacked skulls drip of shrapnel stains
Of raked life quilted with torn-out noises, 
Watery clay defrosts past maimed pains 
As silk skies reap a smudge of roses  

Of raked life quilted with torn-out noises
How shells tremble to resurrect flesh,  
As silk skies reap a smudge of roses 
Birthing ligaments meeting frail breath 

How shells tremble to resurrect flesh 
Watery clay defrosts past maimed pains, 
Birthing ligaments meeting frail breath  
When hunchbacked skulls drip of murky stains



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Such chiffon night  in serenade’s hue;
Littered with stars, orchestrating songs
Awakened bones form in spiral blue,
Stretching eyes grow frocked bodies of dawns

Littered with stars, orchestrating songs 
Another sequel of twilight’s  flight,
Stretching eyes grow frocked bodies of dawns 
A white mist shimmers fermented light

Another sequel of twilight’s  flight 
Awakened bones form in spiral blue, 
A white mist shimmers fermented light 
Such chiffon night, in serenade’s hue 


*double pantoum
  9 syl count
  copyright

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  1. Date: 8/14/2012 10:53:00 AM
    congratulations Nette..this is an excellent poem..Have a nice day!! **Mary**

  1. Date: 1/15/2012 8:12:00 PM
    Congrats, Nette, on a well-deserved win. One Love~O.O.

  1. Date: 1/15/2012 5:13:00 PM
    Amazing and beautifully executed. A masterpiece well deserving of the win. Congratulations Nette!

  1. Date: 1/13/2012 10:57:00 AM
    Congrats. Nette for being among the stars, love and light, vie

  1. Date: 1/13/2012 10:45:00 AM
    Dear nette, hey wonderful lady,how are you?just now i was telling nikko that i'm not forgetting her, neither am i forgetting you, but i miss very much reading your beautiful poems...Super Congrats on your very well deserved win!! Love always and God bless in your endeavours towards making this world a happy place, gautami

  1. Date: 1/13/2012 5:04:00 AM
    ((())) Clap! Clap! Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 1/12/2012 9:31:00 PM
    Congratulations, Nette, on your win in the PS contest. Hugs, catie :)

  1. Date: 1/12/2012 10:14:00 AM
    Nette What an intricate lines of poetry! I followed every line and I have to go back to the title to remind me of the message you want to share. I am so delighted to see you and Nikko up there in the list of winners! March on! Love Dalila

  1. Date: 1/11/2012 10:50:00 PM
    Absolutely wonderful, Nette. Beautiful imagery throughout, congratulations on you big win, Greg

  1. Date: 1/11/2012 3:35:00 PM
    Wow Nette-I'm so impressed! Each line was almost more impressive then the last-I wish I knew how you came up with this type of material! A huge congrats. from me!

  1. Date: 1/11/2012 2:30:00 PM
    Hey! Belated birthday gift for the BIRTHDAY GIRL!!! Congrats to you, NETTE! This is filled with beautiful imagery ...love "another sequel of twilight's flight"..powerful lines, darling. You give the sky and night a whole new facelift here! Love, Gwendolen

  1. Date: 1/11/2012 1:00:00 PM
    You definitely showed your wonderful talent here, nette! Super congrats on your win with this double pantuom! Hindi pa rin ako naka-try magsulat nito, you sure did an amazing job here, and lemme kidnap, whooty whoots for you! Tama ba?! Way to go to you!! hugs :D

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    Date: 1/11/2012 1:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    btw, hahaha you are soo funny, dinugo ka ba sa contest ko? sorry! hehe. my sister to blame... nabasa ko pa somewhere na sabi mo you ha a terrible time, oops!! ayaw mo nun, mind workout :) heehee
  1. Date: 1/11/2012 12:11:00 PM
    Heya nette. I remember this poem. You did a great job with it. Congratulations on your win in the Int. PoetrySoup contest!

  1. Date: 1/11/2012 9:06:00 AM
    Nette, My dear, pleasure to see your win, my friend, A big "Congratulations" Beautiful and worthy poem win. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 1/11/2012 9:03:00 AM
    A thrilling poem, and a wonderful win, Nette!!! You are a stunning, a wonderful writer, that takes our breaths away!! Congratulations!

  1. Date: 1/11/2012 5:45:00 AM
    wonderful and congratulations on your placement. so moving is this. harry

  1. Date: 1/11/2012 5:06:00 AM
    Congratulations on your 4th place win in the Poetrysoup International Contest for August 2011 Nette. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/11/2012 3:32:00 AM
    Congrats on your win. Best wishes Em :)

  1. Date: 1/11/2012 2:08:00 AM
    Congratulation on your wondefrul win x

  1. Date: 1/11/2012 12:28:00 AM
    Congrats on this well deserved win..

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