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In dreams

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In dreams

In Dreams[ a stream-of- consciousness]




I wish the nights could be longer

 and my eyes could watch your blue tranquil  eyes

I cling to your verses and cuddle with your art

For I crave for your one beautiful heart !

In my desperate anxieties While retiring to my bed

I dreamed of those hours and the love that  we made .

When love over powers the filthy desires

And lust is transformed into a karmic world

I think of you in my lonely hours

as I break into your world of dreams

And i hold my breath with this ever fleeting time



just wrote in one shot for the special one !!

 

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  1. Date: 12/4/2011 9:09:00 PM
    just revisiting an old friend and poem,,,whats up woman,,,how have you been....

  1. Date: 5/27/2011 9:07:00 PM
    Smriti, the break is beauty and beyond the best invasion ever... great poem,... p.d.

  1. Date: 5/24/2011 4:25:00 AM
    you are a sun ray of hope, in a dark world, this was amazing, it held me captive and would not let me go....

  1. Date: 5/23/2011 4:07:00 PM
    reminds me of someone thanks for this one

  1. Date: 5/23/2011 3:57:00 PM
    Great emotional poetry i say hold em close , escape no way:) good on ya mate Don

  1. Date: 5/23/2011 7:20:00 AM
    I have something to say on this, but it must be said in a private discourse.

  1. Date: 5/22/2011 9:04:00 PM
    Good write. I find myself once again liking your words of romance.

  1. Date: 5/22/2011 6:03:00 PM
    Thank you for all your comments they are most valued. This is an exceptionally beautiful poem and I wish I had the talent you have.

  1. Date: 5/22/2011 2:48:00 PM
    And i hold my breath with this ever fleeting time.. I love this bit, lovely poem from the heart :@)

  1. Date: 5/22/2011 2:27:00 PM
    Smriti this is truly romantic and so beautiful ..the transitions in every line .. the karmic world reference is key to this piece ..enjoyed luv..

  1. Date: 5/22/2011 2:10:00 PM
    OMG!Such a melting in your arms poem.I'm sure that your special person in your life would love this as I loved reading it.Very Nice....Sincerely,Kacey

  1. Date: 5/22/2011 2:04:00 PM
    a very passionate poem, you have such a great way of expression, it is a true art woman....

  1. Date: 5/22/2011 1:57:00 PM
    very lovely and passionate write on the special one, smriti