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GRATITUDE'S FLOW

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GRATITUDE'S FLOW

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most times, i wander past troubled winds of  shore
when dark sighs heave upon a hazed door,
the crux of crosses seems to welcome  me
listening to whines of own stories seeking plea,
and the wings of gray clouds immerse in  cries
pausing, i carry gratitude with grace still in my eyes,


when moments are lid covered, like  mourning shawl
my senses stoop ever weary as they begin to fall,
then I hear a  chuckling of street kids spilling the day
as if hours are given by a Maker to strum and gaily play,
by  then; I hold His LIGHT, a sliver of it begins to bloom
erasing crumbs of doubt in shades of twisted gloom.

once, thrice by the armchair are letters spread around
mostly payables , some due end of month’s mound
neck shrinks till coffee brews, like soft smoke in heat
thanking the Father for a home that sings in mellow beat


with smiles easing  burdens that seem heavy weight
for heart’s growling hides many things like love, hope, and fate,
my eyes, my skin become plump again, and dear life wanders by
prayers whisper 'all is right', a joyful world wraps a mellow sigh,
looking up at the night’s ray, simple pleasures cannot be bought
I bow for His mercy and let go, to rest on His Light ever sought.




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Robert Ball's Honoring the Father Contest
by: nette onclaud

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  1. Date: 7/29/2011 9:35:00 AM

    Lovely! nette. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. lainie

  1. Date: 7/28/2011 4:04:00 PM

    Congrats Nette on your win...excellent write as usual.

  1. Date: 7/28/2011 10:43:00 AM

    Congrats on the win. awesome..hugs, SJ

  1. Date: 7/28/2011 8:01:00 AM

    awesome write Nette :) congratulations on your win in the contest *hugs*

  1. Date: 7/28/2011 3:59:00 AM

    An amazing write!.Congratulations on your big win.

  1. Date: 7/27/2011 6:44:00 PM

    Congrats Nette luv on another wonderful winning poem in this contest with these lovely poetic lines so amazing ..luv..

  1. Date: 7/27/2011 2:31:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win in Moses's "Best Shot" contest Nette. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/27/2011 12:48:00 PM

    hey Nette, congrats on your win. David

  1. Date: 7/27/2011 12:11:00 PM

    Nette, Your sponsor receives your poem's grace. Congratulations on your poem's honor. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 7/27/2011 12:06:00 PM

    My congratulations on the third place win in the contest of John,nette

  1. Date: 5/16/2011 3:19:00 PM

    Interesting emotions colourful and discriptive write Nette! well enjoyed the reading !

  1. Date: 5/16/2011 12:21:00 PM

    nette, outstanding write and loved the images you sketched here of a nice, friendly neighborhood.Congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 5/16/2011 10:52:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Paula's contest Nette. Love,Carol

  1. Date: 5/15/2011 10:46:00 PM

    Congrats on the win Nette!:) R.M.

  1. Date: 5/15/2011 2:09:00 PM

    Happy Sunday Nette dear and u have seen the unkindness strike again on PS ..so sad to see this too but seems the enemy does not take a vacation luv... my searing write is going to go blog shortly and am content in my own self confidence that this too shall pass..my sweet friend..luv..

  1. Date: 5/15/2011 8:33:00 AM

    Another stunning write, for you Nette!!! I always expect something amazing...and you never fail ! Congratulations!

  1. Date: 5/15/2011 8:14:00 AM

    Many congrats on your win, Nette : )

  1. Date: 5/15/2011 7:54:00 AM

    Amazing write Nette.Congrats on your win...

  1. Date: 5/15/2011 7:30:00 AM

    A stunning piece Nette and I see congratulations are in order as well ;) hope your weekend is a good one *hugs*

  1. Date: 5/15/2011 7:20:00 AM

    Congrats Nette dear friend on your HM in Paula's contest with this magnficent write luv.. enjoy your special honor for excellence and originality in creativity .. as always .. amazed...

  1. Date: 5/15/2011 5:52:00 AM

    Congrats Nette on your HM in te contest... Very nice write my dear riend...Michael

  1. Date: 5/15/2011 5:11:00 AM

    congrats on your HM.. cory

  1. Date: 5/15/2011 1:37:00 AM

    Nette, this is wonderful Wow, you must have posted it right before she closed the contest out. Congrats on your HM, a spot which I am happy to share with you because your poem,lady, is AWESOME. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 5/14/2011 11:57:00 PM

    A fine write Nette. Congratulations x

  1. Date: 5/14/2011 9:34:00 PM

    Very good Nette. Congrats

  1. Date: 5/14/2011 8:51:00 PM

    a stunning elegant gracious and intricate write Nette my friend..one that Paula will find fascinating in its message of gratitude.. being grateful in life tends to bless us even more ..as I have found in life.. wonderful words as only u can pen my friend..good luck luv..

  1. Date: 5/14/2011 7:50:00 PM

    a great piece you penned here, enjoyed it.

  1. Date: 5/14/2011 7:48:00 PM

    You just painted another gleaming example of things to be thankful for, Nette. Fireflies, family, exotic pears....oh such blessings! A class of your own, girl. A class of your own! Gwendolen

  1. Date: 5/14/2011 5:06:00 PM

    Very beautiful way of ending this gem, Nette-- you pained yet again vivid images here, that one can't help look into one's life and be grateful as well :) Gratitude is indeed something we should all carry with us-- btw pls check for "its" in your line, hope this helps...amazing approach to the contest bet it's among the winners! hugs :)

  1. Date: 5/14/2011 1:52:00 PM

    * “Your Beauty Is Sooo Very Rare & Amazing * Beautiful & Beyond Beautiful Nette Oncloud * These Words Could Never Be Uttered * Amid A Greater Lights Truth * You Fascinate * You Captivate * You Shine Brilliant Across The Spectrums View * Bright Dark Does Not Matter * You Are A Treasure * Within Every Way * A Fave By A Poetess Queen * Atop The Canvas of Such Beauty. * Hugs & Kisses * Kisses & Hugs * Always & Forever * Sarah” *

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