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MOON and SEA

~Moon & Sea~

Hey boy won't you open that door?
Lets talk and walk by the edge of the shore.

Come and open your eyes.
Stop looking for reasons, and whys.

This world has more than places to explore.
Don't go and hide when I ask....and prolong you for more.

Stop playing the master under disguise!
Lets find the perfect sunrise and sunset surprise. 

Put your arms around me.
Allow your moon to reflect off my sea.

To much time is passing you by.
Come outside with me and view the horizon in the sky.

I've got my eyes set upon you.
There's no need to feel blue.

Hey boy come and climb up this tree!
I'm gonna show you all the things you can't touch~you can't see.

Lets fit the luxury and beauty of this world into our play.
So! Don't say them words that will set me free to walk away.

Take this kiss and see how it feel deep within your heart.
Close your eyes in my garden, and draw with the fragrance of art.

I want to take you into that space of biological astronomy love.
Making it easy to float with the clouds way up above.

Glide away from the blame of gravity and self destruct.  
Bounce of the dust of hurt when you fall and get cut.

Boy, lets take a breath of this hot air together.
Leave the cold end for someone else's weather.

Follow me beyond the distance of our chemistry.
I will expose to your moon and explain the physics of my sea. 

Give it another chance and you will see!
Your moon is skin deep, needing water from my sea. 

Turn on the tune in your heart, and listen to me. 
In every sunrise, the moon entwines with the sea. 


by;p.d
 

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  1. Date: 4/22/2013 10:02:00 PM

    It's always so great to have a companion with you to discover more and more beauty of this world we live in. This couplet is awesome. It was rewarding, choosing this poem of yours out of random...whoever this boy is, he is lucky to have you as a companion. I see many have enjoyed this couplet of yours. I can see why. Fly on, PD! Always, Laura

  1. Date: 1/4/2013 10:23:00 AM

    excellent couplet.

  1. Date: 10/20/2012 10:14:00 PM

    Wow! This is another excellent write which I've missed my sisie-pooh! But, I'm so glad I found it! I'll keep this again, thanks! You know what? I am in love with the moon, sea, sunshine and sunset. They are so romantic. I have my latest paintings here, lovers kissing at sunset on the beach! Thank you so much! Hold on... i'll bathe myself first... ha ha then go for lunch. I'll be back soon! love, sisie-pooh Leonora

  1. Date: 5/21/2012 5:11:00 PM

    pd, just to let you know, I know you like our names on our poems, but mine is already so long, that when I try to put my name under it, it won't let me edit it. It says "too long" so I know it's at least ONE of my longest poems if I can't even add my name on it!! Sorry, I wanted to put that it was for your contest but I could only just enter it, that's all.. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 7/25/2011 7:49:00 PM

    HOT!

  1. Date: 6/29/2011 5:59:00 AM

    Poem is great but the last two lines are magical . PD. A little sadness in it but I found it a wonderful read. Anne

  1. Date: 6/19/2011 10:49:00 AM

    'Glide away from the blame of gravity and self destruct ' You're MoneyGriPP $$$ with that hot lick! Nice flow PD

  1. Date: 6/14/2011 8:27:00 PM

    Wow, incredible. A true poet you are indeed. I loved this!!!!!

  1. Date: 6/12/2011 2:17:00 PM

    Wonderful lines.You are a true poet.Effortless-stream of words flow through your fingertips...I am well,thank you for asking.I am very honored to have done so well in your contest.Quite enjoyed myself.I will be entering more of yours...Have a fab.day......love....me

  1. Date: 5/28/2011 8:21:00 PM

    Liked this piece - especially the last two lines! Maybe we will meet one day. Peace & blessings Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 5/26/2011 12:49:00 PM

    I hear some sadness within this write. Not what I wish to hear from you. Life is too short for unhappiness dear P.D. Is this why you are not here writing as much? Tickles tickles now smile my friend and cheer up. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/26/2011 5:24:00 AM

    it seems you are a master poet, and your poem here is a great write,it keeps me wanting to read it again and again....

  1. Date: 5/21/2011 5:00:00 PM

    You make me fall deeply in love with you :-) Keep writing those love poems girl I'm all yours. hey P.D. your voice has changed in your comments. the one's before the last one on me Job Change seemed too formal and I have come to the conclusion that that was not really you. but this latest one is :-) XXX

  1. Date: 5/21/2011 3:33:00 PM

    P.D. Love this couplet! Romantic in tone. Nice evolving love poem that incorporates nature. Thanks for reading my poems. I am learning from all of the poets in poetry soup. Thanks for your positive comments on my Haikus. Dalila

  1. Date: 5/20/2011 6:19:00 PM

    W.ow!Great stuff...Thanks again for your support of my work.Have a wonderful evening.Glad I had the chance to read your work....Sincerely,Kacey

  1. Date: 5/20/2011 7:05:00 AM

    Enjoyed much and loved the read of your poem p.d.! I still have these problems mith arms hand and shoulder and it is quite painful. Thank you for you kind comments always!...Love, Gert

  1. Date: 5/20/2011 2:42:00 AM

    wow! P.D.superlike...

  1. Date: 5/20/2011 2:22:00 AM

    7+ luv audree'

  1. Date: 5/20/2011 12:34:00 AM

    Hey P.D.- Racy romantic and really tight couplets. Thanks for sharing your work- Gwendolen ps-just noticed this one topppppped the charts for a while. You have an enormous audience. My audience are typically nonPS members so I am blessed beyond blessing.

  1. Date: 5/19/2011 8:14:00 AM

    Waaaa... This is very sweet P.D. Wonderful rhyming. I enjoyed reading this poem :)

  1. Date: 5/16/2011 8:52:00 PM

    pd....1st' thanks for your kind comments, always.....this poem reaches beyond tactile to a deeper dimension of love, great effect! ea. couplet reaching farther and farther....cool...jmg

  1. Date: 5/16/2011 6:17:00 PM

    Wonderful writing my friend.

  1. Date: 5/16/2011 1:58:00 PM

    very nice....soup mail friend...lizzy

  1. Date: 5/16/2011 6:32:00 AM

    What a exciting and easy-to-read piece. enjoyed very much...Love Randa

  1. Date: 5/16/2011 6:04:00 AM

    Feeling great this morning P.D. my BFF and empowered woman fifty times over luv.. appreciate all your support and all your blogs too... there is a passage in the Bible that I stand firmly on ..'GREATER IS HE THAT IS IN ME THEN HE THAT IS IN THE WORLD.. OR ON P.S...it applies to many and every thing ... attacks are momentary... lasting power is what really counts.. I have it ..lasting power .. thankxx for being a great friend and supporter of my work and contests luv.. your BFF forever..

  1. Date: 5/16/2011 3:23:00 AM

    Awesome! Great poem. Thanks for sharing.

  1. Date: 5/15/2011 2:20:00 PM

    P.D. my BFF .. we stay strong together.. and we survive and WIN... like a 'cat on a hot tin roof' we stay on long and longer .. the haters will fade but the winners never die... the blog u created today to defend Constance and me was impeccable and thankxx for being so supportive and a very valuable friend.. we do pray for all of them as I stated at the end of my HOLLOW poem.. it is utter jealousy more than hatred that runs this machine of unkindness.. appreciate the LUV..your lifetime BFF

  1. Date: 5/15/2011 1:57:00 PM

    this is awesome and so well written. I love both the moon and sea I find them both intriguing! cory

  1. Date: 5/15/2011 7:57:00 AM

    Romantic and dreamy Pd, I really enjoyed this.. A nice one to read on a late Sunday afternoon.. hope the day ahead will be a great one ;)

  1. Date: 5/14/2011 4:20:00 PM

    enjoyed this wonderful piece you wrote. thank you for commenting my spider comfort zone.

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