My Brother Bill by Debbie Duncan

My Brother Bill

Death came to my door today I should of known it was for me When I felt the winds blowing in The angels came to tell me I seen them in my dream I Should of known as they Were coming down nodding my way They were so brilliantly bright to me I forgot to listen to the message As they came to stand in front of me I was awe struck when I seen them I never knew my brother was sick It was cancer of the liver That struck him this day I felt the tears stinging my eyes I tried to keep them at bay It didn't work to my dismay Yes death came to my door And took my brother away " my brother passed on the 6th of May 2011" 3 different dreams, first with my brother, next the angels came in my dream,,,, a month later my mother with my brother standing just behind her left shoulder. About two months later ,I seen my brother at front door about 10 seconds.

The Situation

Date: 2/11/2013 2:28:00 PM

I believe.

Debbie Duncan Date: 2/15/2013 2:10:00 PM

Me too ;}

Sean Sanders

Date: 1/31/2013 7:20:00 AM

The end is outstanding!!!!

Sean Sanders Date: 1/31/2013 7:20:00 AM

This poem is very good poet

robert johnson

Date: 1/24/2013 1:47:00 PM

And so the angels softly sing as fall decends to bring the spring. A cold long winter ices veins. To be thawed out by summer rains. The seasons hold their mighty secrets. Reminding us what our soul forgets. That God is there in every day. To gently help us on our way. Take Care Debbie. :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/12/2013 9:53:00 PM

this is so sad, Debbie. I read your comment below about your mom's dream? And did you dream of the angels too? I am sorry for your loss.

Debbie Duncan Date: 1/12/2013 11:01:00 PM

Thank you for reading ;}

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/3/2012 8:16:00 AM

My heart goes out to you for your loss... I lost 2 siters during a 5 year period... I hate death. Wish we did not have to welcome him or it in... but it is God's plan....thank you for your comment... and the reason of my leaving is to make poets happy..that I am finally gone..however.. more than a hand full are begging me not to please such poets ..always..pd

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 9/20/2012 4:39:00 PM

God bless you and yours, Debbie, the 'angels' must have been sad bringing you this news. The sweet part is that they love you enough to bring it to you in person. I'd had dreams when my husband had passed on...they were so real, I thought he was playing a trick on me, keeping so still. Hope all's going well with you! I looked for your fairy write..I don't think I got the title right.:) Keep well..Mikki

Debbie Duncan Date: 9/20/2012 7:32:00 PM

Thank you Michelle,,must of been a shock your husband passing, my brother didn't live same town ,, he never said he was sick,,, just going to doc for check ups,,, a few weeks later I had a dream of my mom coming to tell me he was with her. I seen in the dream he was standing just behind her left shoulder . I really wanted my mom to stay,,, she had a smile on her face,,, I wrote a poem about her called Lillian" ,,,,,, I will post the other poem " I was there watching" ,,, God Bless you ;}

Funom Makama

Date: 6/11/2012 4:43:00 AM

This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.

Judy Ball

Date: 4/1/2012 9:55:00 AM

So sorry to hear about your beloved brother, Debbie. It's hard to lose a loved one. Cancer took my sister years ago. I ccan totally identify with this. God Bless, JB

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 6/8/2011 9:33:00 AM

Sorry for your loss. God Bless. Vince

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 5/12/2011 11:56:00 AM

A highly poignant write. I send my deepest sympathy for your loss.

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 5/12/2011 7:45:00 AM

My condolences for your tragic loss. Death of a loved one pierces deep, I hope in time you heal. I enjoyed read your heartfelt write. Caryl

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