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ODE TO A BAG

Oh! bag carrier of all my load,

you assist when i need your assistance,

you obey when i ask you to,

When i need to manage my things,

you play the role of a sole  manager,

You serve as my third hand,

You help me in my time of helplessness, 

I wish thou accept rewards ,

I wish thou have mouth to eat,

I wish thou has eyes to see.



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  1. Date: 5/11/2011 12:22:00 PM

    Nice personification of a bag, Ikani

  1. Date: 5/10/2011 12:40:00 PM

    Keep on moving on ikani, welcome to poetrysoup and i wish you all the best. Marvel Godwyn

  1. Date: 5/9/2011 11:59:00 AM

    Nice personification of your bag Ikani....enjoyed..

  1. Date: 5/9/2011 5:05:00 AM

    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Ikani. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

  1. Date: 5/8/2011 11:26:00 AM

    So enjoyed reading your creative poetry tonight Ikani.. a lovely name too.. hope u have fun on P.S. and share with much luv..