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  1. Date: 8/1/2012 7:40:00 AM
    How can the ocean hold back it's waters, you need to swim my friend, enjoyed this romantic verse that needs no candlelight it holds up nicely on it's own, hugs vie

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 3:13:00 PM
    i guess now its clear after reading what rejection can do and afriadness is all about

  1. Date: 1/26/2012 9:52:00 AM
    See, I love to come and read those special ones again. How are you, hope your new year is off to a great start! Luv, Lizzie

  1. Date: 11/9/2011 2:12:00 PM
    Beautiful poem Dave.......your write with so much feeling....please write more!

  1. Date: 9/6/2011 11:31:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week David. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/11/2011 11:13:00 PM
    David, it is special to me because of the tenderness and gentle love expressed in such a wistful way. It gives a melting feeling that kind of catches the breath. You have penned a very lovely verse and I enjoy reading it again and again. It is always fresh to me.

  1. Date: 8/11/2011 11:17:00 AM
    David, check and see if you got soup mail, if not, I will send again.

  1. Date: 8/11/2011 10:11:00 AM
    This one is so special to me, I needed to come back and read again. It is so full of hope and gentle touches.

  1. Date: 8/6/2011 9:52:00 PM
    You have such a special way of describing your feelings and it makes your poetry so readable. You have a depth that holds.

  1. Date: 6/5/2011 5:21:00 PM
    David, now i see why it is called AFRAID.. wow, to be without... great poem,..p.d.

  1. Date: 5/5/2011 8:17:00 PM
    Hey David, This poem is touching. We pass people in the street but the affection is not there. but some how our souls touch someone and connect. That is the inital spark that bring love that is the strongest emotion we have and with it the fear of being disconnected. I love your poem. More please.

  1. Date: 5/5/2011 7:41:00 PM
    That's so sweet. I like it. Good rhyme method.