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A Big Mac

On the road in hungry mode, 
Golden arches call! 
Stomach immensely howling, 
“Big Mac” has attacked.
Hamburger and cheese 
Zingy sauce to please, 
Gulp it down!
Plump!

Written 5/5/11 for Gwendolen Rix Fast Food Epulaeryu contest.




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  1. Date: 5/10/2011 6:25:00 AM

    Yup, yup those days are long gone for me I used to love Burger Kings Whopper Juniors! LOL Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 5/7/2011 6:51:00 AM

    Congratulations Dane Ann on your win in Gwendolen's contest. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/7/2011 2:19:00 AM

    slurpy, slurpy dane! my best cheers for the shining win! :) huggs!

  1. Date: 5/6/2011 8:37:00 PM

    funny final word, Dane Ann! VERY cleverly done, and congratulations.

  1. Date: 5/6/2011 3:07:00 PM

    Congrats. Good job

  1. Date: 5/6/2011 2:31:00 PM

    LOL The next time we go to a McDonald's, I want to see you eat a Big Mac -- hold the ice cream cone. Got a great laugh and I'm delighted to see you get a first-place win! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 5/6/2011 1:24:00 PM

    Many congrats on your number one spot win : )

  1. Date: 5/6/2011 12:41:00 PM

    Great last line, and a great win too. X

  1. Date: 5/6/2011 12:35:00 PM

    Enjoyed this....especially that last word!!! So funny!! Congratulations, Dane Ann!

  1. Date: 5/6/2011 11:49:00 AM

    Congrats Dane on your big win--enjoyed.

  1. Date: 5/6/2011 11:11:00 AM

    Congrats Dane on your well desreved 1st place win in this epulaeryu contest.superbly done...Love,gautami

  1. Date: 5/6/2011 7:42:00 AM

    I believe u were the sole entrant who expressed u were actually out driving around..the Golden Arches calling was clever usage of personification..it's as tho u had been possessed...first your stomach howled...then u were attacked....this was a fun read. Thanks for being a part of this contest, Dane Ann!