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I'll Be 'Revised'

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I'll Be 'Revised'

I'll be...I will be all the man you deserve and more.
   Your heart I will preserve and always adore.

I'll be...I will be the husband you crave and long for.
   To shelter you, I'll work like a slave to be your saviour!

I'll be...I will be your best friend, someone you can lean on.
   My love will never end, for my love is The Eternal Dawn!

I'll be...I will be your hero, your knight in shining armor.
   Everyone will know, for the look in my eyes says, "Never harm her!"

I'll be...I will be all you desire, and keep you satisfied.
   I'll love you till I expire and then be your spiritual guide.

I'll be...I will be all the things you need me to be.
   I'll be the melody on your heartstrings that flows like universal poetry!!

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  1. Date: 5/2/2011 7:08:00 PM
    This is so beautiful and loving Jimmy! Very nice..Love,Deb