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Tender

Love me so tender,so deep and so true,
Uncertain emotions struck so soon,
Is this the life we loved and knew,
Suppressed emotions released on you,

Resisting temptations evil undoings,
Open and trusting,I love how we do this,
Sophisticated feelings left us in bliss,
And when the world is threw with us,
Somehow we'll manage to leave with a kiss.
 
 

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  1. Date: 5/4/2011 6:48:00 PM

    Beautiful and moving, very heart felt. Keep writing Venessa. This scored a 7 for me!!

  1. Date: 5/2/2011 2:21:00 PM

    very passionate feelings of love and its yearnings, venessa

  1. Date: 4/27/2011 11:54:00 PM

    Hey interesting perspective there. P.S: I think there might be a spelling error in line 8 "threw"