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The Good-for-You Fast Food

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The Good-for-You Fast Food

Toasted Italian bread. Yum! I love tuna, but today - beef and provolone, mayo, onions, greens. . . . I open my mouth and insert Foot!
Written April 27 for Gwendolen Rix' contest: "Fast Food Epulaeryu"

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  1. Date: 3/26/2014 9:02:00 AM
    Andrea What a clever and humorous write. First you make the reader hungry with the yummy food, then make them choke on it from laughing at the end. LOL Thanks for the sweet and nice comment on my Robin Hood poem. Hugs

  1. Date: 5/26/2011 3:24:00 AM
    Love tuna with all the trimmings, but today I'll pass. Lately I've been 'inserting' my 'Foot in my mouth. Best wishes, Andrea!! Mikki

  1. Date: 5/7/2011 10:26:00 AM
    Congrats on your win in the contest....George

  1. Date: 5/7/2011 6:55:00 AM
    Congratulations Andrea on your win in Gwendolen's contest. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/7/2011 2:26:00 AM
    haha, you hungry girl! round of applause for the delish win, andrea! :) huggs!

  1. Date: 5/6/2011 3:12:00 PM
    Very nice play on words. Good job. Congrats.

  1. Date: 5/6/2011 2:33:00 PM
    Well done, Andrea! Congratulations on your win in Gwendolen's contest. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 5/6/2011 1:47:00 PM
    Congrats Andrea on your big win in the fast food contest with this super yummy write luv.. enjoy another big win with luv..

  1. Date: 5/6/2011 1:30:00 PM
    LOL - love this one. Many congrats on your wins, Andrea : )

  1. Date: 5/6/2011 12:48:00 PM
    Yum, very nice poem, congrats xx

  1. Date: 5/6/2011 11:54:00 AM
    Hi Andrea,Congrats on your 2nd place win:)--kash

  1. Date: 5/6/2011 11:34:00 AM
    Congrats Andrea on your super win .Wonderful write...this one will have all the crunch too added to it's yummy taste.Loved the wit at the end..Love, gautami

  1. Date: 5/6/2011 8:05:00 AM
    Hi Andrea- I kept wondering who wrote this after I judged bc of the inserting foot in mouth at the end. Excellent ending for a healthy treat. Congrats on this write. I ran each poem thru the syllable counter and then read them out loud to my com-padre for full effect. This is a great read out loud! BLIND JUDGING DOES WORK. :) Hi five, healthy gal! Gwendolen

  1. Date: 5/1/2011 6:27:00 AM
    Thanks for the dish, but not my dish I am from Gandhi's Land, Andrea. I am back from Canada trip.

  1. Date: 4/29/2011 5:43:00 PM
    Ouch I need to lose weight but that sounds yummy. Will try and get soup mail to you soon. Been busy with the gals and their appointments. ttyl love phyl

  1. Date: 4/29/2011 3:04:00 PM
    Andrea I really need to put on some weight and the beef and provolone topped with mayo sound delicious. A calorie overload for some but I could use it. Good luck in the contest. Best to you, Diane

  1. Date: 4/29/2011 10:24:00 AM
    Haha that last line is a hoot! See rhymes with foot? heehee love how you ended this, just when I was envisioning this yummy write-- good one sweetie! & thanks for dropping by my poem-- actually that was the write that I lost in the first place, I re-wrote it and I think I got about 80% in? but I missed the contest..still had fun writing that though-- hugs to you :D

  1. Date: 4/28/2011 5:47:00 PM
    Nothing like a good footlong sub, Andrea! I'm not a teacher (exactly), but I am a homeschool mom who looks for a lesson in everything. :)

  1. Date: 4/28/2011 11:06:00 AM
    Lol, hilarious with a twist Andrea, I enjoyed this one loads, love Wilma

  1. Date: 4/28/2011 10:09:00 AM
    LOL - love it : ) I'm totally stuck on this one - think I'll have to pass

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