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Kayak Fishing Surprise

Ole Les set out by kayak from the shore

Big blue marlin rose from the ocean floor

  Nipped his bait, gave Les a tow

  Water-logged craft sank below

Friends shook their heads and said, "No Les, no more"



4/27/2011
Written for John Freeman's "Fishing" limerick contest
Okay, the man's name wasn't Les ,but this video shows two kayaks being towed 11 
miles by marlins.  I took a little poetic license with the ending too.  Both men 
survived.  If you fish you will be amazed by this video:  
http://www.youtube.com/user/KayakFishingTales?
v=FqVEvNocKTA&feature=pyv&ad=4751720259&kw=kayaking

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  1. Date: 5/14/2011 8:00:00 AM

    Many congratulations Diane on your win in John's fine Fisherman Limerick contest....:)

  1. Date: 5/9/2011 10:17:00 PM

    congratulations on this one with that awesome punch line. I well remember!!

  1. Date: 5/9/2011 11:01:00 AM

    Enjoyed this wonderful write.Congrats Dianne on your win . gautami

  1. Date: 5/9/2011 8:25:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win Diane in John's Fishing contest. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/8/2011 8:46:00 PM

    Good job. Congrats

  1. Date: 5/8/2011 6:17:00 PM

    Congratulations on the fifth place win in the contest of John Freeman, Diane

  1. Date: 5/8/2011 7:34:00 AM

    Thanks for the info and congrats on your win, Diane ...... and what's a poet without poetic license anyway?

  1. Date: 5/8/2011 6:32:00 AM

    I will have to come back here later and look this up..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner..Thanks for stopping by my blog.Our Rat Terrier is not dead yet..He has heart failure..Our vet said she has done all she can do..It is very hard watching him slowly die..The puppy is doing well..Sara

  1. Date: 5/8/2011 6:02:00 AM

    LOL Many congrats on your win, Diane : )

  1. Date: 5/7/2011 9:51:00 PM

    Cute limerick you penned about the story. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 5/7/2011 9:11:00 PM

    very interesting, diane... big congrats on your swet won! :) huggs

  1. Date: 5/7/2011 8:13:00 PM

    Diane, great to see your poem one among the winner's circle. Congratulations on your poem's success. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 5/7/2011 3:18:00 PM

    Congrats Diane on your super big win in the fishing Limerick contest with this really creative write luv.. enjoy another top ten victory with luv..

  1. Date: 5/7/2011 2:48:00 PM

    Way to go, Diane. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 5/3/2011 12:18:00 PM

    Nice humour here Diane.Enjoyed your comment at my poem"peace in my embrace"---kash

  1. Date: 5/2/2011 10:17:00 PM

    ooo! smiles.. Diane.. another goody... good luck in the contest,..p.d.

  1. Date: 5/2/2011 5:36:00 AM

    les is better diane! a witty, sparkling work with winning wishes to you.. greaat stuff! :) huggs, nette

  1. Date: 4/30/2011 12:15:00 PM

    Great limerick formed from this video...no Les no more ..hahahaa... good luck in the contest.

  1. Date: 4/30/2011 7:50:00 AM

    LOL - very witty, Diane : )

  1. Date: 4/29/2011 5:16:00 PM

    Grat oe Diane. A lilttle poetic license goes a log ways. Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 4/29/2011 4:36:00 PM

    Hahaha, good one. Shame on you for sending poor Les to a water grave in this poem, you heartless person, you. lol. Heaven knows how I've managed to miss reading your works thus far. From the couple I've read now I have but one comment: geez!!! Good luck with the contest. ^__^

  1. Date: 4/29/2011 3:33:00 PM

    diane, it's not a calorie overload, not even at a foot long!! That one guy, the one used as their spokesperson, used to eat 2 or 3 subways a day to lose like a hundred pounds. If you want to gain weight try my special diet. the Seefood diet. You see food and you eat it. I can give ya all the details . I did it really good when I was a youn'un!!!

  1. Date: 4/29/2011 3:28:00 PM

    "Down went McGinty ta tha bottom o' tha sea." So, Les. Great Limerick. Good luck in the contest. Love, daver

  1. Date: 4/28/2011 12:49:00 PM

    Cute and clever rendition of a tale of good intentions gone wrong trying to enjoy a day of fishing Diane...good luck in the contest luv..

  1. Date: 4/27/2011 4:39:00 PM

    very very clever , yOu gave it your own special tweak and made it , for me, a WINNER.

  1. Date: 4/27/2011 4:13:00 PM

    LOL I saw the video, I LOVE the poem and I hope you take first place! "No Les, no more" indeed! Funny as all get out, Diane! Hope everyone watches the video. I've never seen anything like it!! A fave for me for sure. Love, Carolyn