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Fishing Woes

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Fishing Woes

Bass fishing on nearby creek 
trying new rod I bought this week.
Got plenty of lures
that really ensures
a big catch if I don’t need to leak.

Creek waters are moving real fast
I’m not sure my bladder will last.
Got lure on the line
it’s reeling just fine
but deep water I failed to cast.

In an anxious and manly haste
a true cast I timely displaced.
Latched on to a nest
where hornets did rest
full bladder no longer encased.

Copyright © 2011  By Caryl S. Muzzey

Fifth Place Winner ~ "Contest Limericks About Fishing” Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: John Freeman
May 27, 2011

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  1. Date: 5/14/2011 8:00:00 AM

    Many congratulations Caryl on your win in John's fine Fisherman Limerick contest....:)

  1. Date: 5/13/2011 6:09:00 PM

    That last line is a hoot!!! Great job, Caryl !!

  1. Date: 5/9/2011 10:16:00 PM

    Congratulations , Caryl. One of the really funny ones!

  1. Date: 5/9/2011 11:01:00 AM

    Enjoyed this wonderful write.Congrats Caryl on your win . gautami

  1. Date: 5/9/2011 8:23:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win Carylin John's Fishing contest. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/8/2011 8:45:00 PM

    Very nice. Congrats

  1. Date: 5/8/2011 6:16:00 PM

    Congratulations on the fourth place win in the contest of John Freeman, Caryl

  1. Date: 5/8/2011 7:31:00 AM

    humorous write Caryl. Got me chuckling. Congratulations to you on your win

  1. Date: 5/8/2011 6:01:00 AM

    LOL Many congrats on your win : )

  1. Date: 5/7/2011 9:49:00 PM

    Great job Caryl. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 5/7/2011 9:09:00 PM

    best cheers for garening a greeat win, caryl! smile... huggs!

  1. Date: 5/7/2011 8:11:00 PM

    Caryl, Great to see you poem in the winner's corcle. Congratulations on your poem's success. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 5/7/2011 3:17:00 PM

    Congrats Caryl on your big win in the fishing Limerick contest my friend..with this really creative write.. enjoy another sweet success with luv and H.M.D. to u ... enjoy..

  1. Date: 5/7/2011 2:51:00 PM

    This is hilarious, Caryl. I can just picture it happening. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 5/1/2011 8:51:00 AM

    I enjoyed the fun and humor, Caryl

  1. Date: 4/26/2011 4:27:00 PM

    That would be a nightmare come true..Enjoyed reading this sure winner..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by and leaving such kind review of my work..Sara

  1. Date: 4/26/2011 2:56:00 PM

    great funny ending, Caryl. If you are alone, you can always just pee on the ground. heehee. I think this one will do great in the contest.