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Sunrise

I sit in my kitchen 
with a cup of tea,
while the world 
is still asleep,
and there in the darkness, 
I  wait for you 
in a state of tranquility.

Soon - a drop 
of magenta  seeps,
into a sea of black,
as it  bleeds and bleeds,
in multiple streams,
bringing the daylight back.

Then from the base, 
of a purple line,
where the sea and earth
meet  sky,
a blazing ball of fire appears,
nearly blinding my eyes,
and the night -  in a flash -  
disappears.

Higher and higher,
that ball of fire,
rises into the sky;
setting the boughs
of the pines ablaze,
in shades of red,
and golden rays,
beneath a sky
now royal blue
as I watch the sun
rise in the East
and dream - again,
of you.

~~~~~


Author:  Elaine George

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  1. Date: 12/28/2012 2:33:00 PM

    HI Elaine, stopping by to bother you again... hope you are well... have a happy 2013... always~ PD

  1. Date: 7/9/2011 2:13:00 PM

    -Higher and higher, that ball of fire, rises into the sky; of the pines ablaze, in shades of red, and golden rays, beneath a sky now royal blue- A----MAZING imagery! You better get to publishing that one girl. Seldom I run across a vital "Blazing Beat" as this! Take care of your work and make share of your work. The world needs to hear your fingers bleed.

  1. Date: 7/5/2011 7:54:00 AM

    Beautifully written Elaine, I can picture myself in the same scenario...luv shannon

  1. Date: 6/30/2011 6:30:00 PM

    Some loved ones affect us like this, blazing balls of fire ;) LighT & Love Lainie

  1. Date: 5/26/2011 6:32:00 PM

    Elaine! A pleasure to see your poem in the winner circle. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 5/26/2011 12:18:00 PM

    Many congrats Elaine on your win ......

  1. Date: 5/26/2011 3:22:00 AM

    Many congrats Elaine on big win in HG's contest with this excellent entry. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

  1. Date: 5/25/2011 6:15:00 PM

    Congrats Lainie on your spectacular win in this contest by HG with this vivid and vibrant write my friend.. enjoy another wonderful win with luv...

  1. Date: 5/25/2011 4:37:00 PM

    Truly beautiful Elaine. I have to get out of my house to see the full sunrise. Wish we had turned our house around when we built it. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 5/25/2011 3:16:00 PM

    Congratulations on the win in the contest of HG, Elaine

  1. Date: 5/25/2011 2:50:00 PM

    ahhh such a lovely conclusion! Congrad's Lainie!! Light & Love

  1. Date: 5/25/2011 10:28:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in HG's contest Lainie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/11/2011 10:51:00 AM

    A vibrant write, Elaine. At first I thought it was about poetical inspiration, though now feels more inclined towards a soulful longing. Whichever, this is a dandy piece! Beautiful imagery, Elaine. Best wishes, Mikki

  1. Date: 5/9/2011 11:43:00 PM

    AWESOME! You've come so Far! Every time you write --Your work somehow gains a little more Depth--Grandeur--And Fascination!

  1. Date: 5/7/2011 3:51:00 AM

    this is lovely...especially your imagery..wonderful...good luck in the contest

  1. Date: 5/2/2011 8:01:00 PM

    Elaine, you're good at describing in a flash how sunrise occurs with its 'golden rays' and a 'royal blue. Nice write.

  1. Date: 5/2/2011 12:37:00 PM

    oh lainie... you went really high in poetic richness here... best winning wishes! huggs, nette

  1. Date: 5/2/2011 5:10:00 AM

    Thank you for your kind comments, Lainie. Wishing you success. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 5/1/2011 5:19:00 AM

    beautiful images to convey your thoughts on sunrise, Lainie

  1. Date: 4/30/2011 6:05:00 PM

    so romantic Laine! Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/29/2011 12:37:00 AM

    It's amazing to me how points of view truly vary. I like the way you welcome the sunrise, and your imagery is splendid. In my case, sunrise sort of sneaks on me, so I find it sort of menacing...not quite the same! Thanks for sharing, I appreciate the different perspective.

  1. Date: 4/28/2011 8:18:00 PM

    Wonderful write. Very crafted poem

  1. Date: 4/28/2011 1:01:00 PM

    Awesome description of the sunrise! The place you live at sounds beautiful! Very well written, Elaine! Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind words on my poems. Love, Caroline.

  1. Date: 4/27/2011 12:08:00 PM

    Beautiful poem -- love the way you stare into the black coffee and it explodes with visions of the universe. If this is a dream, it's one I'd like to share. Best wishes in HG's contest, dear. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 4/27/2011 10:23:00 AM

    Just stopping by today to thank you for all your kinds comments Lainie. Hopefully they will get the site back up and running correctly for everyone soon. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/27/2011 9:04:00 AM

    Hi there Elaine. Beautiful piece. I'm wondering if you received the soupmail I sent a couple of days ago? ~ Soulfire ~

  1. Date: 4/27/2011 4:27:00 AM

    Most penetrating piece Lainie ..creatively full of imagery which astounds the reader.. now am drinking my cup of tea reading your poetry which always uplifts me as it amazes me every day.. good luck in the contest for HG... he will be touched by this entry luv..

  1. Date: 4/27/2011 12:21:00 AM

    wow, this one is amazing. I love how you did it, with it coming up so slowly and magnificently!! A job well done for the contest. Lainie.

  1. Date: 4/26/2011 4:24:00 PM

    Very descriptive and espressive work that reads like a winner to me..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by and leaving uplifting comments..Sara

  1. Date: 4/26/2011 12:40:00 PM

    I enjoyed this Elaine, the company of the rising sun to come worth waiting for... take care.. p.d.

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