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---pink-cheeked baby

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---pink-cheeked baby

pink-cheeked baby
watches the summer storm
silver rattles

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  1. Date: 12/7/2012 3:29:00 PM
    this is beautiful...pd

  1. Date: 11/11/2011 2:08:00 PM
    What a sweet haiku - I think I'm beginning to see what haiku's about. I'm very glad you think I'm improving : )

  1. Date: 4/22/2011 5:00:00 PM
    this is adorable, Debbie-- and read your comment below-- how cool to relate the rattle to lightning & thunder! silver sky & thunder :D very nice & thank you fro all your inspiring comments-- :D hugs your way & Happy Easter )

  1. Date: 4/22/2011 11:49:00 AM
    Debbie this was a great Haiku, loved the way you wrote it.

  1. Date: 4/21/2011 9:55:00 PM
    Hi Debbie. Love the image of the baby watching the sky light up. I'm curious, what syllable/mora patterns are OK when it's not a 5/7/5 Haiku? Many thanks for any help in trying to understand this. ~ Soulfire ~

  1. Date: 4/21/2011 9:32:00 PM
    Such a cute image of the baby, Deb. Nice work! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 4/21/2011 8:21:00 PM
    nice D.G.. cute,..p.d.

  1. Date: 4/21/2011 7:59:00 PM
    Hoping will be seeing a pink cheeked baby this Thanksgiving Day Debbie.. found out it will be a little girl..with silver rattles too..oh boy..lovely Haiku fitting for me tonight...luv..

  1. Date: 4/21/2011 7:16:00 PM
    yes I was hoping you would see and hear the rattle as a indicator that there was lightening :)

  1. Date: 4/21/2011 5:33:00 PM
    Wonderful..Are the silver ratles the lighting bolts? Brenda Atry

  1. Date: 4/21/2011 2:53:00 PM
    Cool juxtapositioning!!

  1. Date: 4/21/2011 1:42:00 PM
    a beautiful Haiku, enjoyed it.