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Beauty

I see the flower blooming
As the sun shines bright
It opens very slowly
and lets in the light
The beauty is incredible
Like nothing seen before
The milky shiny colour
No one could ignore
But now the sky is cloudy
The sun is almost gone
The flower closes quickly
Hopefully to open in 
the new dawn

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  1. Date: 5/18/2012 4:33:00 PM

    A lovely piece, Michelle! Delightful phrasing, rhyme and imagery. Well done indeed!! Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 5/7/2011 9:24:00 PM

    Michelle,, Congratulations on your featured poem this week... Wishing you a wonderful mothers day.. :-) p.d.

  1. Date: 5/2/2011 8:10:00 AM

    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Michelle. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/1/2011 3:00:00 PM

    Michelle, if you go the the home page of Poetrysoup, there are many poems selected to be featured for one week, yours is one of them for this week. Each Sunday it changes... anyways keep up the excellent writing.. and thanks for the compliment on my writing~~

  1. Date: 5/1/2011 1:10:00 PM

    Cngratulations on your poem being featured this week, michelle

  1. Date: 5/1/2011 10:03:00 AM

    Michelle, congratulations on having your beautiful poem featured this week~~