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Heartbroken

I once thought that someone who was heartbroken
Could run out of tears
I once thought that someone who was heartbroken
Got rid of all his fears
Words can either destroy or mend a relationship

I once thought that someone who was heartbroken
Would need a shoulder
I once thought that someone who was heartbroken
Could never find better
Hope can create miracles, even patch a dead organ

I once thought that someone who was heartbroken
Should avoid debility
I once thought that someone who was heartbroken
Was deep into melancholy
Losing someone does not mean that you have no more dignity

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  1. Date: 4/27/2011 3:39:00 PM

    Well. D, I think your right.. let's not lose our dignity... over a foolish broken heart ... I need repairs on mine... LOL.. not broken but crazy... p.d.

  1. Date: 4/27/2011 6:10:00 AM

    welcome to P.S... hope to see more of your writes,, great poem

  1. Date: 4/20/2011 7:22:00 AM

    Very well said, heartfelt by this reader and so relate. Enjoyed !!

  1. Date: 4/17/2011 6:27:00 PM

    Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative touching poetry tonight . with it's emotional theme..hope your time on P.S. will be fun and filled with sharing with luv..

  1. Date: 4/17/2011 3:34:00 PM

    Desiree profound and a beautiful poem. We have the same title ,mine was because I know whats coming and not a thing I can do about it.