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Our Dreams

Our dreams are the sprouting seedlings
reaching to the light of wondrous thought
But the journeys return from misted realms
will leave little bounty of what is brought
Where our spirits soared up high, we sought
and then matched our wits with deities
In waking, our words are but memories
crumbs from a feast of possibilities
and where in reality...

even the simplest task overwhelms

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  1. Date: 5/4/2013 6:58:00 AM

    This is brilliant, my mind is spinning with possibilities. You are a talented writer. A belated welcome to the soup.

  1. Date: 5/4/2013 6:52:00 AM

    Your name means good luck in french, but you don't need it, you have the heart of a writer and the skill to prove it,Bravo! Mon Chers a l'insousiance de l"ammertume, Beautiful verse xxx

  1. Date: 5/2/2011 10:36:00 AM

    wonderful and sensual poem how our dreams take us places...ok bc we need to see more of your poems up on this site so we all can enjoy them! who else agrees with me?

  1. Date: 4/28/2011 2:10:00 PM

    Bonchance wonderful poem. Our dreams take us to places or heights we may never go to as mere mortals . Anne.

  1. Date: 4/27/2011 2:39:00 PM

    Well worded...our dreams can take us anywhere.....reality...well that is overwhelming..Enjoyed. Great reading your poetry !!!!

  1. Date: 4/20/2011 1:44:00 PM

    what is vs what's. fills in the beat, don't you think? darn poems in the middle of the night. pure genius slips away with the sleet in our eyes. we need to figure out how to record them. the light of wondrous thought. that truly is our dream. nice poem. enjoyed.

  1. Date: 4/18/2011 2:24:00 PM

    First two line set the whole poem excellent work . So good to see you here. Feels right.Anne.

  1. Date: 4/17/2011 8:10:00 AM

    This is als very good .great to be back at it ,rating poems that is