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Passion Without Love

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Passion Without Love

I can not understand now passion with a man without love,
This happened when I got to know the big guy up above,
Many Christians are still lost in sexual sin for some reason,
Still having sex without love like they are in the milky season.

I have seen men know Jesus possibly a year maybe two,
Carrying on like playboy bachelors and a wrong choice issue,
Desire is natural, but we must tame the flesh from action too,
Or the Lord will not be pleased and judgment will be due.

I have seen men know Jesus possibly a year maybe two,
But still choose those asleep just for someone to screw,
I try very hard to understand this out of control erection,
If it carries on the Lord will most certainly choose rejection.

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it honestly confuses me when someone is awake, still 
choosing many lovers, then the ones they choose WHOA

when i got woken up that was it, no sex without love,
desire I have had...but not the action..no actions...
I see many men still out of control in this area of their lives
posting up many lovers and so forth...

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  1. Date: 4/17/2011 11:38:00 AM
    this is true, we as men should stand up for what is right just like ou are doing with your words, great poem.

  1. Date: 4/17/2011 7:04:00 AM
    grammar, spelling..blah blah, but not one book written nor do you do it professionally...you enjoy floating your own skills then mocking others...you get joy by bringing others down

  1. Date: 4/17/2011 7:03:00 AM
    would rather have the poorest grammar then running rapid online and stalking someones google connect page and following every blog i follow...would rather be the poorest writer in the world then what you have done to others susanne..seriously..you think you are this gift to the writing world..you are a regular person who has issues is what you are..you are not even published professionally, but rant like you are a writing GOD

  1. Date: 4/17/2011 7:01:00 AM
    yes i know grammar queen..you speak about the grammar on your own blog...twitter too...your spirit shines through susanne..the grammar...the persecution on peoples faith in Christ..every thing you post as fake accounts I see...rest assured of that..

  1. Date: 4/17/2011 6:36:00 AM
    "got woken" i believe is grammatically incorrect Dawn..Oh, this is your nemesis PHREEPOETREE and please dawn don't make me yawn with your pious platitudes and your condescending attitudes alas and alack Dawn will never again read anything i write well I'm not going to cyber fight but when I can approve and concur with somthing you wrote I'll be certain to drop you a note your's in un-conventiality, un-predictablity and an unusually gifted poet, me ~free!~ this is to enlighten u