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LOVE-MAKING IN THE WILD

Alone I roam the dreamland wood
sombre and empty, dark my mood
vain hope to meet my love denied
a throbbing, pumping ache inside 
afar a gleaming stream of blue:
mauve, purple, lilac mixed in hue
‘longside the one in dreams is mine
soft hazel eyes and features fine
 
He becks me close with comely smile
trance-like I float what seems a mile
a fragrant sweet around unfolds
a wondrous sight my eye beholds:
a bed of jasmine, handpicked all
my loved one smiles with look enthralled

He tweaks my nose with twinkling eye
within and –out I’m set afire
he mouths the words our eyes portray
lights fiery love long kept at bay
swept off our feet and smitten deep
entranced our eyes with want to keep
 
We make sweet love, as lovers do
declare our love, sincere and true  
on bed of jasmine hands roam free
scent mingles with heart’s melody
both hearts in tandem skip a beat  
then pick up pace in lustful heat 
pulsating passion multiplies
we merge as one with moans and sighs....
 

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  1. Date: 5/11/2013 5:49:00 PM

    Makes a guy want to go walking in the wodds! Very sensual and tastefuly erotic.

  1. Date: 4/12/2013 4:42:00 AM

    WOW! How absolutely thrilling! Great write, my dear...on such a lovely topic! :) Glad I chose this one to feast on! Hugs!

  1. Date: 7/6/2011 10:20:00 PM

    Hey, I can't find one of yours I haven't read yet. CAn you think of one to point me toward. I ended up on your jungle love poem again. haha. It's a golden oldie of yours now! Go ahead and post the new one!!

  1. Date: 6/28/2011 6:15:00 AM

    Romance written with such talent.

  1. Date: 6/8/2011 5:29:00 AM

    Hey there Delysia, absolutely loved this walk on the wild side ;) love the flow of it as well. Hope your are doing okay hun, enjoy what is left of the week :)tc

  1. Date: 6/6/2011 10:54:00 PM

    Yesss, i remember the good times, and i'm not alone, just as you describe , babe you has me going, a picture keeps a flowing. love it xo Don

  1. Date: 6/2/2011 11:45:00 PM

    Ooooh, jungle love!!! NICE!

  1. Date: 6/2/2011 5:34:00 AM

    Lovely story, lovely rhymes, subject treated carefully to spare our blushes, brilliant (and congrats too).

  1. Date: 6/2/2011 5:26:00 AM

    Congrats on your well deserved win in Poet Destroyer's contest Delysia. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/2/2011 12:28:00 AM

    grats on your awesome contest entry Luv*Skat

  1. Date: 6/1/2011 10:41:00 PM

    Super congrats on your awesome win with this poem that flowed wonderfully and sweetly, Delysia :) Enjoyed the read :)

  1. Date: 6/1/2011 10:15:00 PM

    Super poem here, Delysia. Fine rhymes that move along at a good pace, highlighting one of my favorite hobbies lol. Congratulations on your win~!

  1. Date: 6/1/2011 5:29:00 PM

    D. hendricks!~ CONGRATULATIONS!! with your poem in my old entry contest:-) Thank you very much for supporting my awesome contest. I had so much fun reading each and every entry. I'm glad you where among all my chosen winners. Keep posting your good poems,..p.d.

  1. Date: 6/1/2011 2:11:00 PM

    Many congrats : )

  1. Date: 6/1/2011 1:40:00 PM

    Congratulations on the third place win in the contest, delysia

  1. Date: 6/1/2011 12:58:00 PM

    way to go delysia on another fantastic win in this contest.. oh please enjoy for excellent entry luv... and thankxx for your sweet comments to me ..luv..

  1. Date: 5/26/2011 12:39:00 PM

    Nice poem on sweet love. Congrats Delysia on your win,,love,gautami

  1. Date: 5/26/2011 11:38:00 AM

    Sensuously beautiful!!Congrats on your HM.

  1. Date: 5/25/2011 2:09:00 PM

    Congrats on this HM. Gwendolen

  1. Date: 5/25/2011 10:38:00 AM

    Very passionate, Delysia! Congratulations on your success in Drake's contest. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 5/25/2011 10:14:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Drake's contest Delysia. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/25/2011 9:40:00 AM

    Many congrats on your win, Delysia : )

  1. Date: 5/25/2011 7:49:00 AM

    Conghratulations on the HM win in the contest of drake, delysia

  1. Date: 5/25/2011 5:24:00 AM

    Congrats delysia on your HM in the I raom contest.. super awesome write on the theme luv.. enjoy special honor....

  1. Date: 5/22/2011 7:08:00 AM

    Perfect......absolutely perfect.

  1. Date: 5/7/2011 4:44:00 PM

    you've taken me into this field of flowers and then left me at the bewitching hour. gr888t write

  1. Date: 4/17/2011 3:23:00 PM

    gosh, i feel like a coitus interruptus stepping in to comment here! very sensuous write, dear Squiff, and well orchestrated. bravo! much love, xxxxxx. eph

  1. Date: 4/17/2011 11:06:00 AM

    It has so many good feelings. This is an excellent write

  1. Date: 4/17/2011 9:51:00 AM

    Very romantic words indeed, Delysia

  1. Date: 4/16/2011 6:10:00 PM

    Wow, Awesome piece, delysia. Great job. Nice going. Entertaining and delightful. xxxRalph

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