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A broken heart

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A broken heart

Tear, tear the absent eyes. Shattered ears, shrieking cries! The punctured heart embraced the ever so swelling Soul. Fist clenches! Oh the throbbing, throbbing... heart, then Flame! - Engulfed by panic and darkness, whole. Passionate flares died, scattering in vain. An active heart, now left a crumbled piece of ember coal.

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  1. Date: 4/15/2011 12:55:00 PM
    I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this afternoon Qui. Have a great weekend and I hope you find lots of inspiration along the way. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/15/2011 8:03:00 AM
    That is really beautiful. It hits home with me and my ex

  1. Date: 4/15/2011 1:50:00 AM
    Enjoyed this write. Love the last line, so descriptive. Best wishes Em :)