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Colonisation

The beauty takes my breath away,
I know my kind will want to stay
On this new world that I have found -
It’s somewhere in the Milky Way.

The creatures of this wondrous place
Are scaly lizards, wild and base.
Such monstrous things must be destroyed
So we can spawn another race.

I take a sample of the turf,
Report the planet has such worth,
Then leave and freeze the world in ice
To kill these dinosaurs on Earth.

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  1. Date: 4/27/2011 4:41:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 4/27/2011 9:46:00 AM

    Congratulations on te fourth place win in the contest, jack

  1. Date: 4/27/2011 9:01:00 AM

    Many Congrats Jack on your super win with this unique and different take on this theme. Best wishes, gautami

  1. Date: 4/27/2011 8:24:00 AM

    Great to see your success in the top ten with this great poem Jack. Congratulations on your special entry's grace. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 4/27/2011 3:37:00 AM

    beautiful and did take my breath away. many congrats jack.

  1. Date: 4/26/2011 6:32:00 PM

    My goodness, now here's a noel take on that picture LOL Congrad's on your win oh brave one! Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/26/2011 3:51:00 PM

    Your clever approach paid off, Jack! This has been a fave of mine since I first read it. So happy to see it winning in John's contest. Congratulations, dear friend! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 4/26/2011 12:28:00 PM

    Congratulations Jack on your win in the John Moses Freeman's contest "Rubaiyat". Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/26/2011 12:22:00 PM

    Congrats Jack on your amazing win in John's contest with this perfect poem luv using the new form so well.. enjoy another top ten victory with luv..

  1. Date: 4/26/2011 12:05:00 PM

    Congratulations on your fourth place win Jack (((( applause )))) well done.....:) smiles

  1. Date: 4/26/2011 11:06:00 AM

    Congratulations on 4th place win with this beauty. I enjoyed reading this wonderful write. Caryl

  1. Date: 4/26/2011 11:01:00 AM

    Beautiful Jack, Many congrats on your SUPER WIN, Lainie

  1. Date: 4/17/2011 5:51:00 AM

    made me SMILE..soup mail ;) Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/16/2011 3:27:00 PM

    Good one..Enjoyed reading ..Seems like winner's circle to me..Sara

  1. Date: 4/14/2011 6:54:00 PM

    wow, you took it to sci fi mode!! very interesting and very imaginative.

  1. Date: 4/14/2011 4:57:00 PM

    Nice informative and imaginative piece on dino, jack

  1. Date: 4/14/2011 2:59:00 PM

    So THAT's how the dinosaurs died! Some sci-fi movies depict aliens with reptile features, so you had me going for a while, Jack. Will the aliens return to bestow another Ice Age? Wait and see, my friend... This poem goes to my favorites! Love, Carolyn