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Breathless

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Breathless

Caught in lust's whirlpool -
pretzel entwined limbs
edge me into your
carnal cavity
whilst you taste thine's flesh.

Nail-induced scars
tattoo my back
as wanton yips
pervade night air.

Erotic
stimuli
mingle and

sculpt our
torso's

whole!

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  1. Date: 10/4/2010 1:23:00 PM
    wow bro, nice one! ;)

  1. Date: 10/4/2010 10:35:00 AM
    From what I am reading this morning it looks as if everyone found some inspiration to write this weekend. Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us today John. It is so nice to see a post by you today always a pleasure to read. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/3/2010 11:13:00 AM
    John, passionate write and so aptly titled as well ~ Enjoyed this loads ;)

  1. Date: 10/3/2010 9:58:00 AM
    Wow, this a late night cable movie!!! heated

  1. Date: 10/3/2010 9:39:00 AM
    Very passionate write, John