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Twisted Fate

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Twisted Fate

A pocket of money he doesn’t have
A bucket of tender and love he can’t buy
Of simple moves he complains
Of simple actions he shouts
If he was my man 
I would have never forgiven him
I would have never lasted 
But he isn’t and I’m not that great 
But I’m still mad and annoyed and broken 
Of what he does
Of the craziness that has got into him 
And I pray to God
Day by day 
That all to be resolved
All that love to be returned
I can’t fool myself
What has gone is to never be replaced
What has lost its spark has gone to waste
But hope is killing us to survive
Begging us to stay 
And we listen, we obey 
But hope becomes old
And time is thrown to waste
Love and pleasure, respect 
Is never to be again in place
Why ?
I ask myself this question everyday 
But it seems it has none but one answer
Compulsion….
Compulsion to lose love
Compulsion to bury respect
Compulsion to fight and never be the same
Compulsion to forsake loyalty 
Why ? 
Because dark is stronger than light
Even if light tries to persuade dark 
Dark is too stubborn 
It will never obey…

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  1. Date: 5/16/2011 5:29:00 PM
    Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Louzana

    nubani Avatar louzana nubani
    Date: 1/6/2012 6:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Im Sorry it came out several times,
    nubani Avatar louzana nubani
    Date: 7/7/2011 12:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank You :D !
    nubani Avatar louzana nubani
    Date: 7/7/2011 12:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank You :D !
    nubani Avatar louzana nubani
    Date: 7/7/2011 12:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank You :D !
    nubani Avatar louzana nubani
    Date: 7/7/2011 12:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank You :D !
  1. Date: 5/16/2011 12:47:00 PM
    Congratulations on your featured write this week Louzana. Love, Carol

    nubani Avatar louzana nubani
    Date: 1/6/2012 6:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so very much c:
  1. Date: 5/15/2011 5:52:00 PM
    Congrats louzanna on your featured poem this week on P.S. .. a great one to share with us all with luv..

    nubani Avatar louzana nubani
    Date: 1/6/2012 6:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you :) Much appreciated ^^ Louzana.
  1. Date: 4/13/2011 10:48:00 AM
    I am reading such diverse poems here at PoetrySoup. Poet's hearts are bleeding poetry today. That is where the best poetry comes from. It has been my pleasure to read your poetry today Louzana. Continue to write and share it and I will be back to read it. Have a wonderful day and may you find inspiration along the way. Love, Carol

    nubani Avatar louzana nubani
    Date: 1/6/2012 6:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Have a wonderful day to you as well :) and May i write more and may you come back always to read :)