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Sunlight

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Sunlight

At first glimmer the rooster crows
 proclaiming dawn of a new day
As critters flutter a barn door shudders
 sending the early bird on its way

Among the leaves and hardy stems
 dewy petals curled so tight
Leisurely unfurl and delicately twirl
 embracing the shimmering light

Gently parting the drawn curtains
 waking with a glowing caress
Lured from dreams with diffused beams
 the warm transition out of darkness

Along with elements of fire, water, and air
 relying on its natural sustenance
For growth and vitamin D, warmth and energy
 we cannot be deprived of  our solar radiance

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  1. Date: 6/19/2011 8:49:00 AM
    You have a great talent and my hat off to you for this great poem.

  1. Date: 4/19/2011 6:00:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nikko Palmario's contest "Sunlight" Shani. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/18/2011 11:39:00 AM
    Wonderful write!Congrats Shani on your win in the contest---kashinath

  1. Date: 4/17/2011 5:10:00 PM
    Very very nice meter a sweet write. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/17/2011 2:54:00 AM
    Hey there Shani, congratulations on your win in Nikko's contest with this awesome descriptive write of yours ;) WN

  1. Date: 4/16/2011 6:46:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win with this wonderful write. I enjoyed the read. Caryl

  1. Date: 4/16/2011 2:55:00 PM
    way to go, shani, I hope third place gets a book. YOu deserve one!

  1. Date: 4/16/2011 2:12:00 PM
    Congrtulations on the third place win in the contest, Shani

  1. Date: 4/16/2011 1:14:00 PM
    check soupmail pls thank you :)

  1. Date: 4/16/2011 12:38:00 PM
    Great poem here, filled with vivid, fitting imagery. Congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 4/16/2011 12:33:00 PM
    Congrats Shani on your super win in the Sunlight contest .. exquisite entry .. enjoy with luv..

  1. Date: 4/16/2011 11:53:00 AM
    Congrats on your big win..this was a great subject and you did a great job with it. BG

  1. Date: 4/16/2011 11:48:00 AM
    Sensational! Dear Shani. Many congrats on your BIG WIN. Lainie

  1. Date: 4/16/2011 11:37:00 AM
    Such a joy to see your name up in the winners list...Congrats

  1. Date: 4/16/2011 11:02:00 AM
    This one had amazing lines that just stayed with me, Shani-- I could just picture this in my mind so well :) Loved that 3rd stanza of yours-- Super congrats on this awesome poem :) will soupmail you later :D

  1. Date: 4/16/2011 10:15:00 AM
    Great writing and great win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 4/13/2011 6:55:00 AM
    What a beautiful sunny day here at my house. I am so happy to be able to read your beautiful poetry this morning Shani. I hope you will enjoy your day and that you find inspiration along the way. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/12/2011 9:44:00 PM
    loved how you related it to nature. Great entry!

  1. Date: 4/12/2011 4:15:00 PM
    Very nice. "parting the dawn curtains..." beautiful.