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One Sad Day

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Fifteen years ago when  my father died
To the hospital I carried him that ill fated day
The staff was caring for him so by his side I could not abide
Then very  swiftly to surgery he was  taken away
As I was eating, God spoke to me in spirit and I felt daddy brush as he went away

Contest: God, Ghost, and Love
Sponsor: Dr. Ram Mehta

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  1. Date: 4/25/2011 3:33:00 PM

    This brought back memories of my father Betty Culberson

  1. Date: 4/19/2011 7:49:00 PM

    God spoke to you in spirit..sounds very powerful. a sad day that was for you..but hopefully a light to cleanse the soul as well.. ~Always&Forever Lynette

  1. Date: 4/19/2011 11:55:00 AM

    this was a touching piece, i have very much enjoyed it. my love to you with well wished. --Madison Thomer

  1. Date: 4/19/2011 5:14:00 AM

    Congratulations Sara on your well deserved win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "God, Ghost, and Love". Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/18/2011 1:47:00 PM

    Sara Beautiful beyond words. Sorry for your loss.to lose a parent is very hard.

  1. Date: 4/16/2011 5:59:00 PM

    Great to see you in the top ten Sara. Congratulations on your worthy poem's tenth place. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 4/16/2011 4:46:00 PM

    aww this is sad but very good cory

  1. Date: 4/16/2011 2:17:00 PM

    Many congrats, Sara : )

  1. Date: 4/16/2011 4:21:00 AM

    Many Congrats Sara on your win with this touching.Love, Gautami

  1. Date: 4/16/2011 4:01:00 AM

    Many congrats sara for big win in Dr Ram's contest. Luv & best wishes always - Hitendra Mehta

  1. Date: 4/15/2011 8:58:00 PM

    A very profound write. Warmest congrats for this super win dear.

  1. Date: 4/15/2011 6:25:00 PM

    Dear Sara, The day before my father died, he kissed my hand - something he had never done before; shortly after his passing - one night while I lie awake in bed in tears, I felt his breath on my hand - the same way it had been the day before he died. God Bless you sweetheart. Many congrats on your BIG WIN, Lainie

  1. Date: 4/15/2011 6:15:00 PM

    Sara, I remember this one, because it was so personal. Congratulations, and I really love this one.

  1. Date: 4/15/2011 6:10:00 PM

    A little spooky but excellent wrtie, 7 ++++ from me.

  1. Date: 4/15/2011 4:24:00 PM

    Congrats Sara on your wonderful win in Dr. Ram's contest with this creative entry my friend... enjoy your top ten win with luv and happy weekend...

  1. Date: 4/15/2011 2:09:00 PM

    Beautiful, Sara. My dad passed on 10 yrs. ago. I was not able to be with him at that moment, but I have experienced many moments, since that night, when I feel his closeness. Funny thing, too...he was always rhyming(usually singing it)! I bet you were such a blessing in your father's life...especially when he needed you most. Congrats on your 10th place win! Ellen

  1. Date: 4/15/2011 8:50:00 AM

    Congratlations on the tenth place win in my contest, Sara

  1. Date: 4/14/2011 4:48:00 AM

    You wrote a wonderful poem from your experience, Sara.

  1. Date: 4/12/2011 4:35:00 PM

    What a remarkable experience, Sara, feeling you father's spirit brush and hearing God speak as he passed away. I'm sure it was hard to write about this event, but your poem is breathtaking! Best wishes in Dr. Ram's contest, dear. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 4/12/2011 5:58:00 AM

    Oh so sad Sara and such a spiritual encounter too..good luck in the contest by Dr. Ram.. this is touching as my Daddy passed on similarly ...he was so young..only 33 .. so words relate to my soul..my friend..good luck luv..

  1. Date: 4/10/2011 6:29:00 PM

    enjoyed your thoughts....sad...

  1. Date: 4/10/2011 1:50:00 PM

    It is so difficult to let go a loved one,not just we hold on to their memories but it's like they are always with us,watching us.I lost my younger sister,she was just 15 then.tough...Lots of love and good luck to you,Gautami

  1. Date: 4/10/2011 6:27:00 AM

    A soul touching write, Sara. I feel sadness for you; this would have been a difficult time in your life. A poignant verse penned by your love and lingering thoughts. God's blessings to you and yours, Sara. Wishing you all the best! Love, Mikki

  1. Date: 4/10/2011 5:57:00 AM

    Yes! Mysterious things happen. I have had experience too when my mother died. Thanks for stirring memories. Love, Dave

  1. Date: 4/9/2011 10:16:00 PM

    very sad sara, my grandmother died in my mom's arms in my grandmother's house this poem reminds me of that day, my mom died in a nurshing home 28 years later so i know how you feel and i'm sorry for your lost. this was a very touching piece you wrote.

  1. Date: 4/9/2011 9:47:00 PM

    Sad recollection,Sara.Nice entry for the contest

  1. Date: 4/9/2011 6:55:00 PM

    Two boxes of tissues

  1. Date: 4/9/2011 5:29:00 PM

    Sara dear thank you for the comment My Dad died too 15 years ago the vacumn was complete he later came to pull my toe as he did to this boy asleep

  1. Date: 4/9/2011 2:09:00 PM

    this must have been paiful for you sara.. my dad passed away at age 54; so young! i guess, this is why my sonnet for you spoke of death; i remembered him and my late mom... what a lovely piece filled with garcious menaing.. winning's best to you.. it will surely hit the charts!:)love and hugg, nette

  1. Date: 4/9/2011 1:07:00 PM

    It is hard to talk about this type of happening Sara, not least because changing circumstances throw a different light on our losses year on year, day by day even, we may find a facet of input missed in each different challenge we face, but if love is part of the recall we visit we will be strengthened within!

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