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Commotion

My thoughts are confused
My mind tormented
I feel like I’ve been used 
By this thing who pretended

I have been put in a maze
To discover and escape
All the time of my days
I’ve been stuck to it like tape

But as I reach the end
I realized I was betrayed
But there is something I cannot comprehend
Why drive me away to this path I conveyed

I shall therefore hide my universe
For now I know what to do
I’ll stay silent, carrying this curse
For ever knowing that love is not true

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  1. Date: 4/8/2011 10:03:00 PM

    Very moving. You sound as if you have been deeply wounded.

  1. Date: 4/8/2011 9:11:00 PM

    yes welcome to poetrysoup and this was a great poem. very creative in everyway.

  1. Date: 4/8/2011 8:59:00 PM

    Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your creative write tonight..hope your time on P.S. will be fun and filled with sharing with luv..