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Stupid Little Girl

laugh and point
don't try to help
little girl dying
upon she was tread
she was warned
day in and out
she didn't heed
little girl is dead
Mock if you must
but heed my words
don't follow in the path
that the stupid girl led


          ~I'm not heartless i promise. This is from the view
          of a gaurdian angel that has done all he can to keep
          this teen girl from being reckless and decides that 
          before she can further damn her eternal soul she he
          will stop protecting her. God's grace is withdrawn and
          in an act of mercy she is being allowed to die before
          she can drag anyone else and thus endangering her 
          soul further.

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  1. Date: 8/25/2011 5:18:00 PM

    Sorry for the delay-Thanks so much for entering my contest-A big congrats. to you :)

  1. Date: 8/22/2011 3:13:00 PM

    Congratulations on your placement in Natalie's "Burlesque Twist" contest Manouchka. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/18/2011 3:12:00 AM

    hey Manouchka, congrats on your win David

  1. Date: 8/18/2011 1:49:00 AM

    Wow! How imaginative. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 8/17/2011 10:58:00 PM

    Congrats Manouchka on your wonderful win in this contest with these awesome words so creative my friend.. enjoy...

  1. Date: 4/7/2011 3:42:00 PM

    Wonderful premise for your poetry Manouchka and well written expressions .. luv the guardian angel idea for trying to protect the teenager .. a good one luv..

  1. Date: 4/5/2011 6:01:00 PM

    Thanks for your comment on my poem. Nice write on the young ones of today

  1. Date: 4/5/2011 4:42:00 PM

    Sad that the fact of youth recklessly destroying themselves in so many ways these days..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for stopping by my work..Sara