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that kind of day

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that kind of day

when i think of you
and i think of nothing else
No i can't stand 
to not be in control 
of my own mind

When i think of you
and i think of  nothing else 
my head gets so constipated
i have to empty you out

and when i get that way 
sometimes 
i need 
a little bit of air to breathe
just a little bit of air to breathe
and i just 
might leave
yea i just may not do a thing

sometimes i think
it's all in my head
and in my mind 
you can't get away
but i know 
i don't need it
you, me, 
oh the world can see it 

so precious is our time
mine now
you couldn't hike it 
so i decide how to "alright it" 
on my own terms
and i know 
you had to get away from me
but why'd you have to be 
where i could see

when i think of you
and i think of nothing else
No i can't stand 
to not be in control 
of my own mind

When i think of you
and i think of  nothing else 
my head gets so constipated
i have to empty you out

"the things we already know"

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  1. Date: 4/5/2011 11:33:00 AM
    Interesting thoughts penned...Enjoyed reading your work this afternoon.. Sara

  1. Date: 4/5/2011 7:20:00 AM
    Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry Jerry. I enjoyed reading it and hope to read more of it soon. May you always find the inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/5/2011 4:35:00 AM
    Beautiful images and nice summing up of your thoughts with my head gets so constipated I have to empty you out, Jerry

  1. Date: 4/5/2011 1:33:00 AM
    yes love can be all-consuming..good poem..love,Deb

  1. Date: 4/5/2011 12:07:00 AM
    Sometimes when love is in control, the mind isn't, this is a fine poem, Jerry, enjoyed the read. Harry