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Aqua Sonata

Surfside stand a lady & man
lost in (a moment) on silca lands
so stand this even (handed two)
before a sky limpid blue
with a hearts glow to melt the burning sand.

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Love limned laughter, (lines out) sweet promised sign,
satin billows of cloud surround divine,
backdrop sky a blue silk screen
young as fun forever keen
pre-empting fate this faultless time.

Pouring waves and passion combine
light moods, effervescent, (platinum fine)
flows a presence vivid & wild, 
flaming love & (destiny's child,)
raptured revolving evolving in time.
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By Joe Maverick,copyright 2011 for Linda-Marie's loveland limerick contest.


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  1. Date: 2/23/2013 10:01:00 AM

    A different sort of limericik, romantic instead of gut-busting humorous. I know you, Joseph - you are, at heart, a hopeless romantic. Good stuff. Love, daver

  1. Date: 5/24/2012 3:37:00 PM

    rereading this lovely one ,Joe. yes, Carolyn has many gorgeous poems!

  1. Date: 5/5/2012 2:36:00 PM

    Smile ˜ Tis A Very Pleasantly Perfect In Love's Passion Laced & Picturesque Verse, My Dear Beautiful Friend * 'Pre-Empted Fate' ˜ A Bit Intriguing This Thought Unto Myself? * Love The Love & Thank You, For Your Kind Visit; Very Lovely * My Love, Forever; John!:) ˜

     Avatar Date: 5/5/2012 2:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ...."A Very Beautiful 'Painting In Faves.'" *
  1. Date: 1/10/2012 8:05:00 PM

    joe, i love music too and you've sung a wonderful tunes here (specially that part of flaming love & (destiny child). thanks for stopping by and your kind comments.

  1. Date: 10/23/2011 9:31:00 PM

    heh, limn... now THERE'S a word i hadn't thought 'bout in some time. not sure yet how to read your poetry, but it parenthetically gets my attention~N

  1. Date: 5/16/2011 9:12:00 PM

    came back to see this one. it has lovely images!

  1. Date: 4/25/2011 1:05:00 PM

    Joe, I'm glad to hear Mary's father is enjoying his birthday. Thanks for the update. Please let me know when you receive the mail I sent. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 4/22/2011 11:45:00 AM

    Good afternoon Joe, hi right back at you... and good luck in Lindas contest... love the dreamy passion... my dream date poem... take care...p.d.

  1. Date: 4/13/2011 4:16:00 PM

    Hey Joe! Contratulations on this well deserved win! I keep rereading this, and find something new each time! Has the feel of a "loveland" piece. Beautifully composed, Joe! Best to you and yours, Mikki

  1. Date: 4/12/2011 4:54:00 AM

    Many congrats Joe on notching big win in Linda's Contest with this romantic imaginative piece. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

  1. Date: 4/11/2011 9:21:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win with this wonderful write. I enjoyed the read. Caryl

  1. Date: 4/11/2011 6:23:00 AM

    Congrats Joe, a wonderful tribute to Linda-Marie. Harry

  1. Date: 4/11/2011 5:17:00 AM

    Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 4/11/2011 4:45:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win Joe in Linda-Marie's contest "Loveland Limerick". Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/10/2011 11:25:00 PM

    Congratulations on this series of love limericks and your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 4/10/2011 11:03:00 PM

    A most beautiful romantic write Joe. Many congratulations for this win.

  1. Date: 4/10/2011 8:00:00 PM

    very unique style, dear joe.... love this! … my happy cheers to you for the special win :) huggs, nette

  1. Date: 4/10/2011 2:35:00 PM

    Full of description, Joe! The last line is really cool, raptured revolving evolving in time. Congratulations!

  1. Date: 4/10/2011 11:12:00 AM

    Many congratulations, Joe : ) Jack

  1. Date: 4/10/2011 11:07:00 AM

    What a very uniquely written and vivid entry, Joe-- enjoyed reading this very descriptive write--;love your title for this one too :) congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 4/10/2011 11:06:00 AM

    Soup Mail!!!!

  1. Date: 4/10/2011 11:05:00 AM

    Yes, Joe. This is a rewrite of my poem Is verse Dying' conforming to rules of Sara's contest. Thanks and appreciate your memory

  1. Date: 4/10/2011 11:05:00 AM

    A wonderful write, beautifully worded.Congratulations Joe on your win..Gautami

  1. Date: 4/10/2011 10:32:00 AM

    Congratulations on the sixth place win in the contest of Linda, Joe

  1. Date: 4/10/2011 10:27:00 AM

    Very nice Joe. Congratulations and thank you for comments. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 4/10/2011 10:18:00 AM

    Good to see your poem in the top 6, Joe, Congratulations on your honored 6th place. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 4/10/2011 9:24:00 AM

    I responded to your Soup mail, Joe. I'll see if my bank can make the conversion. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 4/10/2011 8:01:00 AM

    Congrats Joe on your success in my contest luv.. with this stunning entry.. thankxx for your support and friendship too..

  1. Date: 4/8/2011 4:22:00 PM

    thankxx Joe for your marvelous comments always welcome and warm.. appreciate the luv .. and wishing u a happy weekend ..my friend..

  1. Date: 4/6/2011 8:10:00 AM

    Should go well with this wonderful entry, Joe, Good luck. Harry

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