Submit a Poem
Get Your Premium Membership
spacer
 

The Awakening

Anthony Nutter Avatar  Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled The Awakening which was written by poet Anthony Nutter. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by Anthony Nutter

Best Anthony Nutter Poems

+ Fav Poet

The Awakening

A. W. Nutter

Suspended in a darkened shroud
Screaming but making no sound
Naked and vulnerable feeling alone
Time standing still in the unknown

Unable to stop the body from trembling
The scenes from your life begin revealing
Sins and atrocities which were committed
Secrets on display, nothing being omitted

Satan striding through the lake of fire
His torturous kingdom is no ones desire
Spirit retreating into its earth bound shell 
Safe from persecution for a short spell

Suddenly awakening from the nightmare
With a sulphur odor still lingering in the air
Guilt washes over your earth bound form
As on bended knee you pray for reform

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
 
  1. Date: 7/28/2012 11:05:00 AM

    Very powerful poem Anthony> "Satan striding through the lake of fire" This sentence paints a very visual picture Keep up your good work both poetically and with your walk in life Blessings...Anne

  1. Date: 7/4/2011 3:04:00 AM

    nice work. I enjoyed !!!!!!

  1. Date: 5/31/2011 4:54:00 AM

    Brilliant....Thanks so much, I can see hell from there. You are so good.

  1. Date: 5/30/2011 4:36:00 AM

    savage nightmare it does grip, with pounding heart me fingers slip don't sniff the burning sulphur, it... can kill you just a tiny bit :) when i sniffed burning sulphur, it punched me lung almost out, n Cassius wasna there aboutsss almost a coffin fit:) Great poem mate...Don

  1. Date: 5/26/2011 1:21:00 PM

    Well Done! Enjoyed every Line! Did you know you have a couple of empty slots at the top of your Poem list; where poems ought to be.

  1. Date: 5/11/2011 2:50:00 AM

    Its easy to realate to your words. loved reading your poem Thanks for your comments on my poetry x samantha

  1. Date: 4/20/2011 1:13:00 PM

    Many of my own dreams I awaken from I ask myself if I was dreaming then, or am I dreaming now? Poetry like this is food for thought, good stuff.

  1. Date: 4/15/2011 10:40:00 AM

    YES!!! Love it. MORE PLEASE!!!

  1. Date: 4/15/2011 3:47:00 AM

    wow!! you are great! i love it!

  1. Date: 4/14/2011 6:50:00 AM

    Wow you depict it brilliantly!!

  1. Date: 4/1/2011 8:17:00 PM

    maybe your bowels were just over active?? hehe! scary dream/poem

  1. Date: 3/31/2011 6:22:00 PM

    So many wonderful and stunning lines within your poem, you have a gift, I was gripped from the first word, and thanks so much for your kind words on my poem~~

  1. Date: 3/30/2011 2:56:00 PM

    Wow. This is amazing. Looking forward to reading more. Take care. Dana'lynn

  1. Date: 3/30/2011 5:48:00 AM

    Enjoyed reading this excellent piece of poetry this morning Anthony. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol