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About This Poem

Upon reflection and recollection

       Two                       (Form)

      Ends                      Passing

     Meeting                   through..."

  (form a circle)          A circle meeting

      Passing                      On

         On                          Two.

      Through                     Ends

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    Michelle Mac Donald
    Date: 6/6/2012 7:16:00 PM
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    A seeminly simple but strong form, Joe. Your creative mind can pick up on what might appear be a mundane object. However you've created it into a pièce de résistance. Nicely penned! Best wishes, Love, Mikki
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    James Fraser
    Date: 11/20/2011 1:03:00 PM
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    Clever writing concept Joe, nicely written, leaving the reader to think. Have a lovely Sunday :)
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    Anne Rutherford
    Date: 5/31/2011 5:34:00 PM
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    Wow Joe how clever you are , simple but very very good work. you should make this one into a contest to see what else our poets can come up with. Anne.
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 5/6/2011 1:28:00 PM
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    Interesting thoughts and creative presentation..Your presence at my work was encouraging..Sara
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 4/21/2011 6:53:00 PM
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    How are you Joe,... besides at your best... thanks for the hi's while i was out... i'm smiling again... and here to stay..lol... the last time i said that... things went wrong... enjoyed the form here..p.d.
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    Robert Ball
    Date: 4/16/2011 4:39:00 PM
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    because it's different, God bless, and thank you for your comment, you were the only one, oh well that's life we just came from the beach as I live 500 yards away, So the Lord is great.

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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 4/13/2011 10:54:00 PM
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    I just came back to this cool set because I am going in circles trying to find a poem of yours I never ead. Perhaps there are none! thanks for your comments today.
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    Date: 4/13/2011 6:33:00 PM
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    What an interesting piece. I like the artistic presentation. Thank you for sharing your poem with us and for your kind comment on mine. Karen
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    T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet
    Date: 4/10/2011 12:59:00 PM
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    Interesting Joe.An absolute beauty.Thank you for your kind congrats to me on my win Joe.~Teresa~
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    James Foulk
    Date: 4/5/2011 9:51:00 AM
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    yes very interesting piece of poetry, very creative. thank you for reading Newton Corners and for your comment.
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    binibining P.iNk
    Date: 4/3/2011 10:50:00 PM
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    Very intriguing & interesting piece you have here, Joe-- you got me reading & re-reading this-- so cool how you use the same words for each "column" -- it's definitely like a riddle!Enjoyed reading this thought-provoking write :)

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    Eamon Duffin
    Date: 4/2/2011 12:30:00 PM
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    Forgot to leave rating 1st time. Done now
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    Eamon Duffin
    Date: 4/2/2011 12:27:00 PM
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    Hi Joe. Just back to normal (whatever that is) after tour of Germany. Will get back to the writing soon. Nice to visit again. This is a clever piece, makes one think until we accept that the different is the same. Nice to be back. Eamon

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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 3/31/2011 1:08:00 PM
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    thankxx Joe my friend.. much appreciated that my words touched u as u read on the gift of creating poetry luv..
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    Doris Culverhouse
    Date: 3/31/2011 6:01:00 AM
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    different poem, enjyoed
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    Constance La France
    Date: 3/30/2011 4:41:00 PM
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    I've read this many times now, it reminds me of a riddle, I can connect different words together, very original and creative, Joe~~
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 3/29/2011 8:36:00 PM
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    thankxx Joe ..appreciate your thoughts on my contest entry luv.. very encouraging remarks my friend...
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    Matthew Anish
    Date: 3/29/2011 6:50:00 PM
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    Good example of a "shape" poem! Thank you for commenitng on my Last Jew on Earth. You are the only one - so far who did. I just entered a member contest. Yours Matthew Anish
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    Dr.Ram Mehta
    Date: 3/29/2011 4:29:00 PM
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    Very creative and intellectual write , Joe
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    Carolyn Devonshire
    Date: 3/29/2011 11:56:00 AM
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    What an interesting new form you've created here, Joe. Always did like the thought of rings being an eternal symbol of unity. If one rides life in a circle, it goes on forever. That is our hope when exchanging rings at weddings, but sometimes those unions are broken. Very clever! Love, Carolyn
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 3/29/2011 8:26:00 AM
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    I enjoyed reading your creative poetry today Joe. Have a wonderful day and may you find even more inspiration to write as the day goes by. Love, Carol
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    Wilma Neels
    Date: 3/29/2011 4:47:00 AM
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    Quite an interesting piece Joe.. I am with Harry on this one just as curious on your take lol
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    nette onclaud
    Date: 3/28/2011 10:13:00 PM
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    experimental yet street-smart.. what a combination , joe.. enjoed the experience! :) huggs, nette
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 3/28/2011 9:49:00 PM
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    Very interesting. Made me stop and think!! What LInda said, unique and creative, JOe!
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 3/28/2011 8:23:00 PM
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    Unique and original creativity Joe my friend.. awesome aspects of presentation with your expressions and the method of posting this piece luv.. good luck if for any contest luv..
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    harry horsman
    Date: 3/28/2011 8:17:00 PM
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    etc,etc. interesting aspect here Joe, would like to know your interpretation. Harry


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