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Your Obsession Got Us Killed

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Your Obsession Got Us Killed

Love has gone far
So far that you murdered her 
Obsess with such a rabbit hole
The hole that made you so hateful
You love that embrace
The heat up to your throat 
That fire covering your whole body
Why have you done this?

The way it seems 
Fire has spread fast
I know it hurts kid
But this is the end of us
Your sins
Welcome to hell darling

I rejected your money
Your world
And i don't regret it
Otherwise i would be you 
You took my life and clean yours
With the white towels of my heaven?
I hated you for more than 6 years
But now i love the way you burn
A beautiful scream of pain and plague
I feed from you
I am that parasite you let go to this filthy streets
I now command over you
I am your martyr

The way it seems 
Fire has spread fast
I know it hurts kid
But this is the end of us
Your sins
Welcome to hell darling

So good the feeling of love
Warmth under ice
Vapor over water
Sex over love
This hate
This will
This feeling in me
I know is lovely for me
I feel immortal
But i am not
I burn with you
I love you to death
'So death do us part
Confusion's got me here
So here it all dies
It all weights to sins
I will give you this hand
The hand of faith
I will not fall
I shall not fall


The way it seems 
Fire has spread fast
I know it hurts kid
But this is the end of us
Your sins
Welcome to hell darling
So now my love
I know you do not understand
But i will explain

Everything changed 
Just when you called me liar
I knew i could not control time
And i know i didn't held the truth 
But all in my head refuses to fight back at you
I love you
But time has evolved this
Like a rotting shell
With devils inside
My gates open
I am your martyr
So tonight darling you come with me
Get in this trip
Only one way ticket
Say no
No, no, no, no, no, no
I will kill you for betrayal
Maybe he can give you what i cannot
I promise
He will miss you
(Affair)

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  1. Date: 4/15/2011 11:42:00 PM
    UM... WOW ! This is a really good poem. Very strong emotions of anger ! I felt it the whole time I was reading. Good job !!