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haiku- Silver Ripples

wild splash in waves                                                                             
salt on my lips                                                                                         
after we kiss

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  1. Date: 3/24/2011 9:29:00 AM

    There is nothing more romantic than love by the seaside, Celene. A beautiful haiku! Love you, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/23/2011 6:17:00 AM

    Hello young lady ! Only from experience can a soul spill words as this on slip...great write dear poet ! much love, james

  1. Date: 3/22/2011 1:06:00 PM

    mmm and more mmm, nice one Celene.....:)

  1. Date: 3/22/2011 12:47:00 PM

    salty....TAH

  1. Date: 3/22/2011 9:33:00 AM

    What a beautiful and romantic haiku. Very passionate and yet a quiet sweetness is hidden in the lines. Take care and keep writing. Many heart-felt thanks for your comments, Jancarl

  1. Date: 3/22/2011 5:58:00 AM

    Wonderfully intense imagery, Celene. Passionate, yet sensitive. Keep your poetical waves coming, you are sorely missed! Best to you, Mikki

  1. Date: 3/22/2011 5:41:00 AM

    Well I am so ready for this scene to become reality as Summer approaches my friend.. splashing waves on salty lips after kiss sounds wonderful and sensuous too.. so happy u are here again ..miss ya so much sweets...

  1. Date: 3/21/2011 6:43:00 PM

    very good : )

  1. Date: 3/21/2011 4:41:00 PM

    Nice cute haiku on kiss, celene

  1. Date: 3/21/2011 3:59:00 PM

    Smile ~ "Wow, I Can Feel The Waves of 'This Beautifully Colourful Canvas,' Rushing Through My Deepest Soul, 'My Beautiful Tinkerbell;' A Fave by 'A Fave' Upon The Shores of, 'From Here to Eternity; Love, Always,'" John!:) ~

  1. Date: 3/21/2011 3:18:00 PM

    oh....lovely is this!!! :)

  1. Date: 3/21/2011 3:17:00 PM

    oooh, wowie, Celene. This is just great!!

  1. Date: 3/21/2011 2:43:00 PM

    Smile, *^_^* This is such a very beautiful haiku, my dear; absolutely spellbinding imagery amid this seaside loveliness; a fave. === love, jasper