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Redemption Never Have Been Heavier

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Redemption Never Have Been Heavier

Im still waiting
The getaway much waited
Escaping gods eyes
Much to believe away
Home was so warm
Now so much cold under this rain
Baby sister...
Everything is gonna be alright...

Bliss falls heavy
But for such we do fight hard
Warm indeed
Wait and wait never you will be forgotten

Stand by my side girl
Im here for you
Sorry about mother
She have not made a mistake
Yet we do believe such a tale
Eyes are deceived
So we are not the only ones
This is just a test
God will safe us both

Bliss falls heavy
But for such we do fight hard
Warm indeed
Wait and wait never you will be forgotten
But yet forgotten

Sister keep up
Cover your body with this jacket
I promise we will find warm a new home soon
Don't close your eyes
God is always here
Do you feel ok?
Big brother
May i ask a question?
Yes sweetie
If god knew we've die here
Why did he brought us here?

Bliss falls heavy
But for such we do fight hard
Warm indeed
Wait and wait never you will be forgotten
But yet forgotten
God didn't answer
So we move on

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