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Take Aim

Take Aim

I think she wants me, she doesnt want me
But, she means alot to me.
 its been six months since I have left you all
and you would tell me everything you saw in me
check it out, im slipping towards " what am i doing here?"
check it out, im staying for one more single year.

Its been six months since i have left you all
and you would tell me when those angles began to fall
and i take aim, and i take aim

I sit back as my tears look after me.
behind this film of past, my memorys degrate me
check it out, im slipping towards 'my life is not clear"
check it out, my mind blurs with each and every year.

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  1. Date: 3/16/2011 8:48:00 AM

    I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Carlo. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Enter and enjoy some of the contests and I wish you the best in them. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/15/2011 11:25:00 PM

    I like it its unique... its one of the best poems I've read And welcome