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OVER THE TRANQUIL PLACE WHERE LOVE SUDDENLY GREW

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OVER THE TRANQUIL PLACE WHERE LOVE SUDDENLY GREW

Over the tranquil place where love suddenly grew,
night carved the tender image of two souls breathing together,
to delight themselves until the sky turned dark blue;
we watched the stars come much closer and get brighter.


Night carved the tender image of two souls breathing together,
and it united them with deep passion and a solemn promise;
we watched the stars come much closer and get brighter,
we pondered the new mystery...so distant was the sunrise.


And it united them with deep passion and a solemn promise
as a memory which can't be easily erased or even forgotten,
we pondered the new mystery...so distant was the sunrise;
in awe we stood, while we could no longer see the horizon.


As a memory that can't be easily erased or even forgotten,
our minds remembered the tenderness of each hug and kiss;
in awe we stood, while we could no longer see the horizon...
the nightingales came to listen and learn words of sweetness.  


Our minds remembered the tenderness of each hug and kiss,
to delight themselves until the sky turned dark blue;
the nightingales came to listen and learn words of sweetness...
over the tranquil place where love suddenly grew.


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  1. Date: 10/18/2012 9:06:00 PM

    Andrew, here I am with a be-lated :-) congratulations with your wonderful win in the " April, 2011 international Contest " It is very nice to see you on this winning list..*'.*'.*' hip hip hooray. Good night :-) always~ PD

  1. Date: 8/23/2011 9:16:00 PM

    Congrats Andrew on your HM in PS International contest with this dynamic piece of poetry my friend.. luv..

  1. Date: 8/23/2011 3:59:00 PM

    Congratulations April, 2011 Honorable Mention Contest Winner! Caryl Ramsdale

  1. Date: 8/23/2011 7:53:00 AM

    Congratulations on your placement in PoetrySoup's International Poetry Contest Andrew. I am very happy for you. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/22/2011 8:18:00 PM

    A great use of the form a wonderful winning write! BIG Congrad's Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/22/2011 4:52:00 PM

    Congratulations Andrew on your big win in the International Contest.Wonderful poem.

  1. Date: 8/22/2011 11:08:00 AM

    Way to go Andrew! congratulations on your great accomplishment. Enjoy the glory. Big smile. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 8/22/2011 9:43:00 AM

    Dear Andrew, it's wonderful to see one of my favorite poets placing in the Soup Admin contest. Congratulations, my friend. I'm so happy for you! Love, carolyn

  1. Date: 8/22/2011 8:39:00 AM

    Nice and beautiful! Many congrats on your amazing win in poetry soup international contest. *Cheers*

  1. Date: 8/22/2011 8:13:00 AM

    Congrats on your win...Sara

  1. Date: 8/22/2011 12:21:00 AM

    Congratualtions Andrew on your great win!!! With Love, Pravs.

  1. Date: 8/21/2011 11:46:00 PM

    Beautiful Pantoum, Andrew. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN in the Poetry Soup International competion.

  1. Date: 8/2/2011 1:51:00 PM

    Congratulations on your poetry x2 making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Andrew. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/23/2011 6:35:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Andrew. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/20/2011 5:14:00 PM

    Congrats Andrew on your pantoum being featured. Vince

  1. Date: 6/19/2011 2:35:00 PM

    Congrats Andrew on your featured poem this week on PS.. a great one to share with us all my friend with luv..

  1. Date: 3/21/2011 10:21:00 AM

    A heartfelt congratulations to you Andrew for your win in Paula's contest "Back To Back". Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/21/2011 7:52:00 AM

    A wonderful write, I enjoyed the read. Congratulations on your fourth place win. Caryl

  1. Date: 3/20/2011 12:36:00 PM

    Passionate write here Andrew.Enjoyed.Congrats on your win---kashinath

  1. Date: 3/19/2011 12:39:00 AM

    congrats Andrew, on your excellent Pantoum, and it being in the winners circle. Harry

  1. Date: 3/18/2011 3:42:00 PM

    Congrats Andrew on your wonderful win in Paula's Pantoum contest .. a vibrant write my friend.. enjoy with luv..

  1. Date: 3/18/2011 11:17:00 AM

    An awesome job my man Andrew, great to see you near the top. Congratulations on your worthy fourth place victory. Enjoy! Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 3/17/2011 10:45:00 PM

    Oh,my, this is luscious!!!

  1. Date: 3/15/2011 2:34:00 PM

    Oh, you have given us so much romance with your pantoum, Andrew. So many wonderful images. Memories of such moments can't, as you say, "be easily erased or even forgotten." I have been struggling with this form for Catie's contest, but it seems to flow so easily for you. Wishing you success! (And I've forgiven the son. He treats everyone the same way.) Love, Carolyn