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MOON

                                                              *           
                                                      Moon
                                                Light my
                                              Way, it is
                                             So  dark
                                         From were
                                       I come, and
                                      When    the
                                      Nights   are
                                        Gray, I will
                                         Over come
                                           My  fears
                                             Subside
                                               Into the
                                                 Nights
                                                      Moon.
                                                              *
-Miranda Lambert-

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  1. Date: 3/20/2011 3:39:00 PM

    great read. very creative

  1. Date: 3/17/2011 7:51:00 PM

    good work on the shape. john

  1. Date: 3/17/2011 8:00:00 AM

    IT was a little hard to arrange not going to lie...lol...but I wasn't giving up till i got it just right...thanks for noticing Robb, Love Randa

  1. Date: 3/16/2011 8:47:00 PM

    fun moon....was it hard to arrange?

  1. Date: 3/12/2011 7:17:00 PM

    Oh so lovely Miranda.. a perfect crest of the moon and elegant words to compliment it.. appreciate your most gracious comment on my contest entry luv.. glad u enjoyed my story ..good luck with your contest and if u need any assistance please ask the "Sweetheart".. glad to help out...

  1. Date: 3/12/2011 2:45:00 AM

    i'm struck.. i love the moon and this was a delight to feel and see... wonderful stuff, miranda.. :) huggs, nette

  1. Date: 3/11/2011 4:37:00 PM

    What a cool shape you came up with, Miranda. Nice, peaceful message as well. And I like the little star you placed beneath the moon! Very creative. Regarding your contest, the dictionary defines burlesque as a satire or spoof on something. I didn't see the movie you mentioned, but are you looking for poems on burlesque shows? Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/10/2011 6:37:00 PM

    Outstanding shape, Miranda. Cleverly done and excellent wording. Kudos to you. Thanks for your gracious comments. Luv Ralph