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My Best Friend

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My Best Friend

MY BEST FRIEND
I left him in that place
Of forgotten things 
Told him I come back someday
Left and never stayed
I feel bad for doing what I did
I'm ashamed cause he never came
I see lights at his house
I step out and he can't be found
I shut my mouth
Go inside hit the wall
I cry
He trusted me
He gave up on me
I feel ashamed 
Hate that day
I'm going back
I run for days
Months go by
Times flies
I walk that dark place
Could he be here?
I see him
And say 
We have to go
He didn't moved a muscle
No breath to be heard
No pulse felt
Was I too late?
Shoulda came that day
I'm ashamed
I cry in plead
He's not awaking 
Look what I done
My Best Friend is gone
I walk home 
I cry, hit the walls
It's all my fault 
I take this knife 
Shove it through my eye
For this 
I deserve to die

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  1. Date: 5/18/2011 8:31:00 AM
    Many congratulations on your win in Walayee's fine contest Angela .....:)

  1. Date: 5/17/2011 4:47:00 PM
    Angela, Great Job, Congratulations on your success in Lay's contest. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 5/17/2011 12:05:00 PM
    Congratulations on the win in Lay's contest Angela. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/17/2011 4:21:00 AM
    Congratulations on the win in the contest of walayee

  1. Date: 5/16/2011 4:39:00 PM
    Congrats Angela on your HM in Lay's cool contest of collaboration.. with this excellent entry luv.. enjoy this special honor...

  1. Date: 3/8/2011 12:32:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading today Angela even though it is so sad. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/6/2011 7:56:00 PM
    What a terrifying one!

  1. Date: 3/6/2011 6:56:00 AM
    Very sad write...

  1. Date: 3/6/2011 6:20:00 AM
    intense poem well done!!!!