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Prefect Thunderstorm

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Prefect Thunderstorm

As the sky breaks,  I see u,  Darkness passes bye....
Rumbling from the thunder sends chills down my spine, 
forcing my lips to part with a sigh... 
I smelt u then felt u aching in my bones,
 Before the clouds ever began to cry....

Like a force of nature u move through my world,
Uncontrollable to me and like the weather man I strive to know why... 
U come and go as u please,sometimes splashing momentarily,
Awaiting your fall from the sky, Which can seem unbearable when days sometime 
weeks pass and like earth my soul feels dry.....

But through the night tapping on my window says I'm here come outside... 
The Feel of passion in every drop lightening flashes,as the rain slowly subside... 
Leaving me replenished watching as your departure makes me rainbows in the 
sky... Love making is like"A PERFECT THUNDER STORM" made between U and I....

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  1. Date: 3/4/2011 10:14:00 PM
    really good, liked this a lot