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Messege in a Bottle-Clean-Joe

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Messege in a Bottle-Clean-Joe

As I drop this bottle from my lips
Exist no more my final sips
Sealed with drops of blood and tears
This note and my lost years
Represents the price
Of liquid vice
Future seen
Sober 
Clean

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  1. Date: 12/8/2012 6:50:00 AM

    Hey Joe....like this poem very much...not only does it flow nice, it has a great journey and a terrific ending - Shaz

  1. Date: 6/16/2012 10:18:00 PM

    Hey Joe, happy for you that you were able to read this message in the bottle. Not everyone can see their "lost years"! Hope you were able to maintain keeping "sober and clean"! Best wishes, Mikki

  1. Date: 4/29/2011 8:54:00 PM

    Good luck with that. I'm tanked as i write this, haha. but i appreciate the sentiment.

  1. Date: 4/19/2011 2:15:00 PM

    i am pleased i read this piece today Joe,and my best regards.

  1. Date: 3/9/2011 2:09:00 PM

    Hello Joe, This is wonderful, so well done indeed!!! As Always, Shar

  1. Date: 3/5/2011 1:02:00 PM

    Oh my my!!! I reckon this one will be a winner Joe, absolutely love your approach to the contest :) Wilma

  1. Date: 3/5/2011 11:43:00 AM

    What a different take on the challenge, Joe! And very empowering too-- Really like this one :)

  1. Date: 3/4/2011 11:13:00 PM

    lAnother winner here, I think. Great one. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 3/4/2011 2:25:00 PM

    Excellent! Great message! Best of luck to you in the contest! Ellen

  1. Date: 3/4/2011 1:03:00 PM

    The weekend is here and I am trying to get some poetry read. I am glad you had something new here for me to enjoy today Joe. I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with new found inspiration. The best to you in thecontest. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/4/2011 12:42:00 PM

    Nice decision and a good message, Joe

  1. Date: 3/4/2011 11:56:00 AM

    Great way to interpret Linda's contest Joe. Best wishes in the contest~Chris